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  • morbid;

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    It took me forever to read this >.< just been busy but I'm glad I finally got to it! :D this was a good chapter. I'm glad that Kayla is finally standing up for herself and that Zack isn't being an abusive asshole :D I'm really excited for the 31st because I want to continue reading! ;3 keep up the good work!
    December 24th, 2011 at 03:39am
  • adam driver.

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    dun. dun. DUN. & the plot thickens.
    well, I'm sad she's leaving, but she needs to. maybe Zacky will realize what he has when it's gone. hopefully. because I want them to be happy together! :) anyway, excited for December 31st! lol. Merry Christmas Kayla! :D
    December 22nd, 2011 at 05:59am
  • hachie

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    Wow so her own father said all that to her?
    Man no wonder she stopped talking to him after she told him about her relationship with Zacky.
    And Zacky is begging her to stay and that he would stay out of the house if that helps her.
    But she does a valid point, they need to work out their problems.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 02:52am
  • krysta2010

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    well I have to say that this is somewhat familiar though mine wasn't quite as severe I got out before it could get that way and really made me cry but I still love the way you capture them its almost as if you yourself or someone close to you has been abused but I won't push that subject anyway I love this story and can't wait to find out what happens update soonish please :)
    December 7th, 2011 at 11:17am
  • morbid;

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    this chapter was so good! I really liked this one. It was emotional and dark. Good job, Kayla (:
    Zack is fucked up. Kayla is fucked up. I want to know the drama with Zack and Matt. Mia is a good friend! :) what will happen when her cousins find out about this? o__o or when Brian does?!? LKVNSOEfgvoiuweio UPDATE SOON! I WANNA KNOW ALL THE ANSWERS ALREADY :DDD
    December 6th, 2011 at 06:01am
  • SpencerG

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    Damn!! I'm fucking scared to go downstairs if there is a possibility some shit like that is gonna happen!! Fuck!! I need a ramp or an elevator!!
    But I'm soo fucking confused by their relationship right now. I guess I'll just have to wait to see happens later.
    December 6th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • hachie

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    Man that mist hurt like hell!
    She lied for Zacky to the police and now I determine to finish what he started in the room with him.
    He knows what Zacky has been doing Kayla and he wants to stop it.
    It seems that Zacky is jusr stuck in this hole that just tells him to hit Kayla.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    December 5th, 2011 at 10:22pm
  • CerysEvans

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    I love this story so much! <3
    December 5th, 2011 at 08:42pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    She could have told the police the whole truth of what Zacky been doing for her, but she didn't. she still loves him and a part of her still believe he might change. she really needs to find a way out of this relationship...Zacky just been hurting her.
    Maybe a trip back home to see her Uncle is what she need. it help her think things out clearly.
    Great update
    December 5th, 2011 at 03:32pm
  • adam driver.

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    Zacky.... ugh! so sad. love this story though. really, really good update! (:
    December 5th, 2011 at 10:18am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Oh no..I scared for her :O
    I hope Zacky doesn't kill her. I thought he was going to change..and now he just went back to his old ways. :(
    Great update
    December 2nd, 2011 at 04:20am
  • SpencerG

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    I DON'T WANT HER TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
    November 29th, 2011 at 02:28am
  • Linzee_Gee

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    :/ i hope they fix it
    November 28th, 2011 at 07:59pm
  • caitlinstarz

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    That was so intense! loved this update so much
    November 28th, 2011 at 05:59pm
  • adam driver.

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    Well... that's depressing. Although, I love this story. *sigh*
    November 28th, 2011 at 09:41am
  • soapy

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    oh my gosh. poor kayla, i hope she is okay. zacky needs to control his anger. it started developing in extra credit and now has completely taken off! kayla is silly for going back to him, but there are moments when zacky is so sweet and loving, so i guess she can't help but hold onto that because that's what she is still hoping for from him. this story is so powerful. i'm so worried about kayla and zacky. their relationship was doing well in extra credit and now things have just gone down the hill really badly. zacky must still be upset that he can't teach anymore because that's the power he had over kayla and he still wants to have that power over her, but its not like he can give her detention, so i guess he hits her ): i know you say this is a dark abusive story, but i do hope that we can see some sweet side of zacky at some point, more off. gosh, your writing is so good. i feel so sucked into their relationship while i'm reading, you are doing a fantastic job. i'm glad you are back!!
    November 28th, 2011 at 09:12am
  • hachie

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    I guess after being away from Kayla for so long, ideas formed in Zacky's head.
    Like how her family is trying to persuade her to leave him, or if she was seeing other guys and that fear began to build up inside, eventually going over the top.
    Then he saw her, he could help but beat her into submission.
    When he tried to force himself onto her, she fought back because she didn't want to be raped by him and then what Shaun told her would be true, Zacky is a monster.
    Man a head wound is really bad especially if the head sustains more injuries!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 28th, 2011 at 09:06am
  • banana sykes.

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    I hope he doesn't kill her! Glad you're back from your break!!
    November 28th, 2011 at 06:50am
  • morbid;

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    Love, this was an AMAZING chapter! No joke. Great detail; I was like shaking with anticipation. Ask my sister. I was also screaming at Kayla and Zack. XD I'm crazy
    Ok. I hope he doesn't kill her! Omg and I hope he doesn't rape her either! I'm going to cry! UPDATE SOON OR I SWEAR I WILL KILL MYSELF!
    November 28th, 2011 at 05:41am
  • Lola the Kid

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    Oh my gosh! This was so sad! I can't stress how much I hope that he doesn't kill her! It was a great chapter! :) Can't wait for more! So glad you're back!!!
    November 28th, 2011 at 05:00am