Night of the Fallen Angel - Comments

I love your level of description in the first chapter. It was kinda short but it's alright for a first chapter. The second was equally good and I can't wait to read more.

hi =D I like it =) Its a good beginning, but its just hard to read because of the color of the words =) lol it kinda blends in with the eye lashes in the picture xD but other then that its really good =) really descriptive =D