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  • MusicFreak26

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    Each chapter the point of view changes between the three of them and after a little while I plan on not having the girlfriend have a POV because there wont be any point of it since she wont really be in the story anymore.
    June 29th, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • mazzers

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    I was all pissed at first cuz I was like what the fuck this isn't even Jalex but now I like it :p
    I've actually always wanted to read a story from the girlfriend's point of view
    June 28th, 2011 at 07:07am
  • MusicFreak26

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    Aw! Thank you. I'm very new to people reading my stories so I was nervous about this one especially since it was my first fic but I think it is working out well! And I will definitly read your stories as well!

    -Jess
    June 28th, 2011 at 06:16am
  • LiveInColor

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    At first I wasnt sure if I would like the story, now I love the story. Keep writing. And read my story please.
    June 28th, 2011 at 05:47am
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