Here's where I become horribly critical and brutally honest. I like the plot and the ideas that you have, but I don't think it's all that well put together. It's mostly the grammar that gets me, but I'd usually have to read a sentence over to be able to understand it. But besides that, I really like it, and City Lights (:
Oooh AWESOME story. Stories about Ricky are always awesome. I loved it and I'm going to read the sequel next. If I was Juliet I would just travel with Ricky on his tours lol. Oh and since you like Motionless in White you should read my romance story I just started starring Angelo Parente. :) It's gonna be awesome :)
Hahaha. I'm so silly. I was about to tell you that I couldn't read it and didn't like highlighting everything to do so... Then I realized that it was because I had the page zoomed in so the picture was under the story. I'm a bit of a tard. Anyway, I like this story. (: