The King. - Comments

Dawww <3 so cute. I agree; this was a great interpretation of the photo.

This was wonderful! You got the way a child would talk perfectly and I adored the ending.
Good luck in your contest!

I absolutely loved this.
It made me smile so much and also feel slightly nostalgic at the same time. I liked the way it was written with more developed descriptions but still had a very child like feel to the tone.
I also thought it was a brilliant interpretation of that photo. Well done.

Ahh, this really made me laugh! First drabble/story in a while that has done that. :)
I really liked it! It's very different from the other drabbles. And it's very creative. I think it's really cute and sweet. Very well done!