Betrayed - Comments

update soon so good

So I just wanna say that I found the prequel to this the other day, and I read it in like 2 days and then I just read all of this today.. and I LOVE it :D

Poor Matt :( I know he loves Bear and all but what he said made me sad :(
I really hope Mina is preggers :D and maybe that'll help Neche change her mind about waiting but I'm not gonna get my hopes up :)
I'm excited for the next chapter :D :D

Haha Matt is like a little kid :) he's thinking up a plan to get her pregnant before the year mark or he actually is just gonna bug Jason and Mina lol
More soon?

More I love this I think he is trying to figure out a way to get her knocked up lol

I'm glad Brian apologized but I have a feeling he will mess up again :/ but Bear is so cute :)

haha Jason and Matt make me laugh! Lol I wish I had a Berry brother...or Zacky....:D Can't wait for the next update (:

I love the new house :) and I wanna steal Bear's room I love that one the most lol and I just realized that I didn't comment on your other cowrite....shit *goes back and comments*

amazing story i love it is jimmy still available? if he's not then its fine

The house is amazing! And Neche and Matt are so cute together! :D

Awwe Bear is adorable (and I'm sure I say that everytime lol but he is :3) and moving isn't as fun as I thought it'd be. I'm sooo bored here at my new house but I think my friends at my new school make up for it lol. And that was totally besides the point really lol. My bad I seem to do that a lot haha >.> anyways Bear=adorable and moving=interesting can't wait to see what happens next.
Oh and Brian=the biggest douchemaster I've ever read in a story :)

Wow this is my third comment in a row. And moving? Are they going to get separate houses or what? Wow I can't wait for the next chapter! You guys are awesome! Love this story so much!

Haha Matt is too funny! And Bear is so adorable! I smile every time you mention his name in this story :D

Wow Brian! I can't believe you can't be happy for Jason and Mina! Like go get laid or something because you need to get over the fact that Jason has Mina and you don't! WOW!

Sorry, just a little pissed at Brian right now. But the rest of the chapters are really good :D You guys are great writers.

And I know I said I would comment after every chapter but I have been at my camp for the 4th of July, with no internet and no cell service the whole weekend. And we finally got wifi here and I haven't been able to get on a computer until now. But yeah, again I promise I will try my hardest. :D

REALLY?!?! REALLY BRIAN?! ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME DUDE?! WHY CAN'T YOU JUST GET YOU HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS AND JUST ACCEPT THAT MINA IS WITH JASON AND NOT YOU?!?!?! You seriously need to get laid or something like for real dude. I really fucking dislike you right now Brian. I really do.

*coughs* Um sorry about that he's just really pissing me off *rubs back of head*. Anyways I laughed when Neche called Brian a cock sucker lol. And I like the ring Jason gave Mina but it's too big for my taste but that doesn't matter now does it haha it was really fucking gorgeous though :D

And Brian is such a fucking Debbie Downer it's not even funny >.<

Awh. I really like this one! :)
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i laughted so hard it brought tears to my eyes loved this update soon

I'm glad Neche stopped Mina before she could do something stupid :) and Bear just cracked me up and poor Matt isn't gonna be able to "wrestle" with Neche for a while lol.

The chapter by Kels I didn't comment on because there are no words to explain it, and I didn't read it until this morning after I read the chapter by Neche. I didn't see that coming, I thought she would just straight out ask Jason, but I guess not. And I was readiing the chapter by Neche this morning and WOAH! FUNNY AS ALL GET OUT! I was laughing so hard I fell out of my chair with my laptop! Anyway, can't wait for more :D

Wow. That's all that my brain can think to say. I'm not sure if it's cuz I'm confused cuz I just woke up not that long ago or if it's how Mina reacted. But I can't wait for more :)