Oblivious - Comments

Oh, and I think you should write an actual story around this. :)
About how Ron and Draco got together and stuff.
If you ever decide to, pleeease let me know :D

Aww, this was so adorable :)

You certainly got a more difficult pair. >.< But you did well with it. I liked the piece. It was rather short and simple, but it told a story nonetheless. I loved the part about how Mrs. Weasley would react if she found out that another of her boys were gay. XD That made me smile. I also like how there wasn't a whole lot of dialogue between Ron and Draco, but there was just enough to make it seem real. (Although, to be honest, I've never imagined Ron and Draco together.) Harry's reaction to it was beautiful and Hermione's calm and collected attitude was funny. I like how she was just all, "Oh, you couldn't tell?" Like it was no big deal. Anyway, good job and thanks for participating in my contest. : )