The End. - Comments

First, I just have to say that this short story is really good...awesome actually. I didn't know what to expect when I clicked on it, but I'm happy I did. I could feel the emotion the character was experiencing, it really reminded me of my depression days and the way you wrote it was very real. Like the person below me said, it didn't sound or feel like a whiny teenager that just wanted to rant about their life, the entire chapter was filled with a raw emotion that was very...real.
The writing itself was flawless (to me) and I really enjoyed the fact that it's very obvious that you worked hard on word choice, tone, and even flow to make the biggest impact with the reader.
Basically, just a well written story that I'm glad to have read!

Wow. That was just... Undescribable.
Other stories like this are usually just rants, meaningless words. Just a teenager moaning on how unappreciated they are, how depressed they are over, in my opinion, totally pointless things. I dunno, maybe I'm just insensitive. Yet you managed to structure it up pretty well. And it did have a point, it actually meant something. So yeah, I think you did pretty well.

This is really, really, really good. I freaking loved it, it actually made me cry. ):