Slaves of the Moon - Comments

i like it. cant wait for another update. :)

I'll admit that the layout is pretty but I have a few problems reading stuff where the writing's on the right side. No fault of yours, of course, and absolutely not a reflection on the writing itself.

Twilight pretty much killed all hope of me enjoying werewolves but you have very realistic characters and I like the description in the first chapter. It was very easy to visualize the scene in my head. It's also interesting how the first chapter was in third-person POV and the second chapter was in the 1st person POV.

Juliet reminds me a little bit of one of my friends; trying to use her charms to lure someone into something. Oh, and the fashion advice. Are the three brothers the same as from the 1st chapter? I'd assume so since this is all one story. xD

Your characters are well-written, the dialogue's believable and I usually don't say this about this type of story but you've really got me hooked. Great job. :)

:D This was a great chapter, Nessa! :D I love the characterization between your characters. And their personalities. Juliet is becoming one of my favorite characters. Is she going to be in the story more often? <3

I really am falling in love with your story. Your characters are very real and that's like the most important thing you can have. Forget the action, the plot, the descriptions, forget all of that. If you don't have solid characters you don't have anything. I really like how you've created them so seamlessly, describing them and the way they are in only a few words. Ah, please let me know when you update again. (:

I want more. Nessa! :D Teehee. It is a bit confusing but because I haven't actually read the original, I will assume that everything will be explained as more chapters are written. :) I love the lay out by the way. <3

The layout is pretty. :'3 <3

Anyways. x]
This was... Confusing?
The quotes at the beginning really set the tone, but I was a bit confused when I got the story part. >_>
Keep going, I want to see what happens. I may not be a good follower, so just comment my profile with each update. x]

So, I really like this story so far. I'm not really sure what they did, but I love how you've started it out. It has mystery and it has this promise of action. I'm totally going to subscribe (:

Ah you know I love it wifey!!

AWESOMEEEE! I love this, its so much dfferent than other werewolf stories. I really like this and I want to keep reading :)

I want to point out that I really like how to established the story this way, how you entered the characters. Its different to me, but really good. I like your style.