Cancerstick - Comments

I love these drabbles about objects! I haven't found many of them, but the ones I have are great :) It's so cool how alive you can make a simple inanimate object seem! I'll be back for more :D

Gorgeous little piece =]

I love this! It’s so well written.
The character you have created seems to fit so well with the idea of cigarettes and the damage they do.
I like the way you use short sentences as though you are having to pause to breath due to smoke and the way you use rhetorical questions to show the cigarette’s self belief. I also like the way you repeat the word "love" to show just how much people need them and how when the character swears it makes him seem so passionate about his influence on people and the extremes they go to because of cigarettes (best dreams/worst nightmare)
Sorry if I went a little over-analytical.

I love the personification in this! You make the cigarette into a very vidictive, evil character and I just love the second person. It really made me feel weary of cigarettes, and of the dangers.
You have a wonderful writing style - don't give up okay?