Thursday - Comments

I love this story.

AND BASICALLY.
This is just the most amazing one-shot I've read. It beats this one-shot about Nick Santinose. The title was like, "The Boy in the Plaid Shirt" or something like that. I wrote in a comment that it was the best one shot I had read. Ever. Welp, guess what. This is better. This is the best. Yes. I just said that.
SUCK ON DAT, MIBBIANS.

And I spelled proof wrong.

THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING PIECE OF FICTION WITH MY NAME IN IT EVER.
Which means, basically, it is better than Sam Markum's one shot about a girl named PJ crossed with Stephen Gomez.

And when it was like:
I called out a number, at random.

“Hit,” Ray said.

Finally.
I said aloud, "That was so Dessen." Because it was.

And the end. It was beautiful because it tied into the song. Which was explained without being typed out. The title made sense, and he talked about the dudes asking him what it was about. And the kiss. ;lkja;lkdf;d And the description. a;kdsjf;aklsdf And the dude.

You are an amazing writer that should just do it for a living.

You're what, 17? Yeah, I think so. And you can produce this. In two days or so. This is proff of your raw talent. You're just an amazing writer, an amazing person, and gosh darn it, if you don't get published one day, I will not have faith in humanity.

And this is my new favorite story.