I think this is a great story but Jimmy is supposed to be dead and you wrote him alive in the last chapter! I mean I totally love Jimmy and wish he could come back to life but you specifically said he died and all of sudden he pops up in ch twelve lol :) I'm just saying if you are gonna make him alive I would go back and rewrite the early chapters so people don't get confused :)
October 8th, 2011 at 01:34am