and I don't mind the chapters. lets just say 300 chapters is a good number that way you can talk about college, and after college lol jk that may be a lot
At first I kind of hated Josie for starting that conversation, but it ended up being a good one. When she said "He came to me when he wanted to feel nothing because you made him feel so much. You gave him more than he knew what to do with." that was such a perfect description of why Gavin did all the crappy things he did. I loved it!! And I think Jeannie needed to hear that. Hope at some point Gavin will get his shit together enough to have that conversation with Jeannie himself.
I'm really going to miss this story and these characters when it's over, but I'm hoping you'll continue to write other stories.
I really liked this chapter. I think this was the most honest Gavin has been in the whole story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Very curious as to where this is going or where it will end up.
I feel like Jeannie needs to stay single and stop thinking about both of the guys. She needs to figure herself out and figure out what it is that she wants. Idk I just want her to improve on her self love and find her true self. This goes the same for Gavin he definetly needs to sort through his baggage attend therapy or something just to help him figure himself out as well. To be honest I kind of like Gavin's and Josie's friendship she cares for him and he is slowly starting to truelly trust someone. Thank you for the update!!!
@ kat456 Oh my gosh, never apologize for long comments. This website is a lot quieter than it used to be and obviously I'm not writing to get comments, but it's really nice to know that someone is reading and reacting and potentially even finding joy in my writing. I enjoy doing it so much and these updates are usually just written quickly on my phone so that I don't get too rusty and just, I appreciate hearing back from you so much. So, never apologize. I am so hugely thankful for them and I hope you never stop!!!
That was such a good chapter!!! Jacob is a sweetheart, he really is. The holding hands thing was so heart warming, I loved it! I also love Barbie!
And then there was Gavin! That was so good as well! It was everything I wanted from him! Him finally speaking about everything and finally understanding things. And I love that he sees and that he admits (not only to himself, but to someone else) that he "ruining" her. The thing he said about her not smiling like she used to was so powerfull and the fact that he knows he did that... wow. SO GOOD! I would like to see him and Jeannie having an open and honest conversation like that.
I feel like I say this in every comment, but I love how you go deep into your characters. They're not flat, their emotions are so complex and real that I can actually feel it as I read.
On a different note, things are going to be really awkward at work for Jeannie and Josie.
Can't wait for the next one! (Sorry about the huge comments, but your story gives me all the feels!)
What a beautiful chapter!! I felt so bad for Jeannie, it was heartbreaking. And no matter how much I hate Gavin, he has a way of always making me feel bad for him. I just want him to get his shit together and to stop making the same mistakes again and again and to actually show how he feels. It's so frustrating. I hope that even if they don't end up together Gavin at least finds a way of showing Jeannie that she wasn't meaningless to him, of making her feel loved or cared for. Because the way I see it the most heartbreaking part is that she never felt like he cared for her and i think he did, he just doesn't know to show/cope with the feeling.
Your story and characters are so good! Can't wait for the next one.
Literally had to catch up on the past 4 chapters. At this point I don't know who to root for. I am neither team Gavin or team Jacob. Thank you for the past chapter!!!
I'm so done with Gavin. He acts like he wants to make things right with Jeannie (and I actually think he does) but then he goes after Josie again. He just keeps doing the same things again and again and doesn't even realise that he's doing the wrong thing because it's just so natural to him. He needs to grow up and actually change and not just change when Jeannie is there. I'm so mad at him.
Sorry about the rant. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I love the recent updates! I honestly get so excited when I get an email saying you've updated. I've been hooked on your story for years. I can't wait for your next chapter, hope it's soon! Happy New Year!