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  • jamila1990

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    and I don't mind the chapters. lets just say 300 chapters is a good number that way you can talk about college, and after college lol jk that may be a lot
    June 22nd, 2017 at 02:15am
  • jamila1990

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    yay you started again :)
    June 22nd, 2017 at 02:14am
  • kat456

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    At first I kind of hated Josie for starting that conversation, but it ended up being a good one.
    When she said "He came to me when he wanted to feel nothing because you made him feel so much. You gave him more than he knew what to do with." that was such a perfect description of why Gavin did all the crappy things he did. I loved it!! And I think Jeannie needed to hear that. Hope at some point Gavin will get his shit together enough to have that conversation with Jeannie himself.

    I'm really going to miss this story and these characters when it's over, but I'm hoping you'll continue to write other stories.

    Can't wait for the next one!
    June 21st, 2017 at 10:07pm
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Lovely chapter as always. I really enjoyed how this was just a Jeannie and Rosie chapter trying to patch up thing and see the light in the darkness.
    June 20th, 2017 at 08:28am
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    please update!! i love this
    May 19th, 2017 at 10:02am
  • SynysterKitty113

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    I really liked this chapter. I think this was the most honest Gavin has been in the whole story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Very curious as to where this is going or where it will end up.
    March 30th, 2017 at 12:59am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    I feel like Jeannie needs to stay single and stop thinking about both of the guys. She needs to figure herself out and figure out what it is that she wants. Idk I just want her to improve on her self love and find her true self.
    This goes the same for Gavin he definetly needs to sort through his baggage attend therapy or something just to help him figure himself out as well.
    To be honest I kind of like Gavin's and Josie's friendship she cares for him and he is slowly starting to truelly trust someone.
    Thank you for the update!!!
    March 29th, 2017 at 08:54am
  • rubi67

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    Gavin is breaking my heart, he's such an idiot. You've got me on an emotional rollercoaster thanks to this relationship.
    March 19th, 2017 at 03:08pm
  • satellite mind.

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    @ kat456
    Oh my gosh, never apologize for long comments. This website is a lot quieter than it used to be and obviously I'm not writing to get comments, but it's really nice to know that someone is reading and reacting and potentially even finding joy in my writing. I enjoy doing it so much and these updates are usually just written quickly on my phone so that I don't get too rusty and just, I appreciate hearing back from you so much. So, never apologize. I am so hugely thankful for them and I hope you never stop!!!
    March 16th, 2017 at 02:52am
  • kat456

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    That was such a good chapter!!!
    Jacob is a sweetheart, he really is. The holding hands thing was so heart warming, I loved it!
    I also love Barbie!

    And then there was Gavin! That was so good as well! It was everything I wanted from him! Him finally speaking about everything and finally understanding things. And I love that he sees and that he admits (not only to himself, but to someone else) that he "ruining" her. The thing he said about her not smiling like she used to was so powerfull and the fact that he knows he did that... wow. SO GOOD!
    I would like to see him and Jeannie having an open and honest conversation like that.

    I feel like I say this in every comment, but I love how you go deep into your characters. They're not flat, their emotions are so complex and real that I can actually feel it as I read.

    On a different note, things are going to be really awkward at work for Jeannie and Josie.

    Can't wait for the next one! (Sorry about the huge comments, but your story gives me all the feels!)
    March 14th, 2017 at 06:03pm
  • MissLux

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    I really just want to see Jeannie and Jacob together!! I hope he doesn't hate her when he finds out who Gavin really is :(
    March 14th, 2017 at 04:32pm
  • kat456

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    What a beautiful chapter!! I felt so bad for Jeannie, it was heartbreaking. And no matter how much I hate Gavin, he has a way of always making me feel bad for him. I just want him to get his shit together and to stop making the same mistakes again and again and to actually show how he feels. It's so frustrating. I hope that even if they don't end up together Gavin at least finds a way of showing Jeannie that she wasn't meaningless to him, of making her feel loved or cared for. Because the way I see it the most heartbreaking part is that she never felt like he cared for her and i think he did, he just doesn't know to show/cope with the feeling.

    Your story and characters are so good! Can't wait for the next one.
    February 21st, 2017 at 12:47am
  • bailey08

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    I just want them together alreadyyyyy
    February 19th, 2017 at 05:05am
  • jamila1990

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    Hope you update more often. I'm all for Jeanie staying single right now.
    February 19th, 2017 at 12:03am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Literally had to catch up on the past 4 chapters. At this point I don't know who to root for. I am neither team Gavin or team Jacob. Thank you for the past chapter!!!
    January 19th, 2017 at 03:00am
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    I like surprises. I'm trying to keep you guys on your toes. Haha. Thanks for reading!
    January 10th, 2017 at 09:51pm
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    I'm so glad to hear that! Thank you so much for sticking around. I'll do my best to have the next update out soon!
    January 10th, 2017 at 09:49pm
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    Hes such an ass, right?

    But don't apologize for that. Rant all you want. I like to hear it. Haha. Thanks for reading!
    January 10th, 2017 at 09:48pm
  • kat456

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    I'm so done with Gavin. He acts like he wants to make things right with Jeannie (and I actually think he does) but then he goes after Josie again. He just keeps doing the same things again and again and doesn't even realise that he's doing the wrong thing because it's just so natural to him. He needs to grow up and actually change and not just change when Jeannie is there. I'm so mad at him.

    Sorry about the rant. Can't wait for the next chapter.
    January 10th, 2017 at 06:38pm
  • AisforAubrey

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    I love the recent updates! I honestly get so excited when I get an email saying you've updated. I've been hooked on your story for years. I can't wait for your next chapter, hope it's soon! Happy New Year!
    January 9th, 2017 at 03:36am