This was truly adorable- the background, well actually, the lack of solid background for the story area made it hard to read when it got to the picture.
Also the lack of breaks in paragraphs resulting in a huge clump of writing made it harder too.
Setting aside the technical, this was well written and a joy to read.(:
the background, well actually, the lack of solid background for the story area made it hard to read when it got to the picture.
Also the lack of breaks in paragraphs resulting in a huge clump of writing made it harder too.
Setting aside the technical, this was well written and a joy to read.(: