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  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Wait, what did he say? Lol. Great chapter! Can't wait for the coffee date!
    October 21st, 2011 at 08:10pm
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    <3 I am so happy that her and Kris are going on a coffee date. I love this story. Can't wiat for teh next chapter :D
    October 21st, 2011 at 07:40pm
  • dreamerforever

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    So happy to find an update. I enjoyed it. It may not have had a lot of action, but it doesn't always need that. I have those chapters in all of my stories.
    October 17th, 2011 at 06:56pm
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Lack of action can be good and is sometimes necessary. Stories are never as good when you don't know what's going on inside the minds of the characters. I really enjoyed this chapter. I love that she rides horses, it's unique and adds something different to the story. I liked the bit about her parents. And I know I didn't mention this before, but in a previous chapter you mentioned that random screams are commonplace in a college dorm. I loved that because, as someone that unfortunately is living in a college dorm, I know that to be so true! Moving on though, I wonder if she'll tell Kris about Max hurting her and if she does, how he'll react. And because of you bringing up the fact that Max picked up on her feelings for Tanger, I'm concerned about that now too! Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for more. :)
    October 16th, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Oh please tell me that you haven't given up on this story! It's so good. I really want to read more!
    October 15th, 2011 at 11:33pm
  • natashax29xx

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    can't wait for the next chapter!
    August 31st, 2011 at 10:39pm
  • dreamerforever

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    I don't ever disliked Max so much. What an asshole. I'm so glad this is fiction and not reality. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
    August 20th, 2011 at 05:16am
  • JillNotJillian

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    Loved that chapter! It was so raw and just perfectly amazing for what it had to convey. I really hope that Max won't get that far again though or release that video. Can't wait for the next one and keep up the fabulous work!!!
    August 19th, 2011 at 02:12pm
  • JillNotJillian

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    I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I love all the suspense now with Max and why Kris would do all of that for her even when Max found out it was Audrey who ruined his car. I can't wait for more and keep up the spectacular work!!!
    August 14th, 2011 at 05:19pm
  • natashax29xx

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    i love this story!
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:27pm
  • Jayla1231

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    Just found this and really enjoyed it so far. I adore Kris. (bad flyers fan, lol. Interesting to see where this goes
    July 21st, 2011 at 01:53am
  • dreamerforever

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    I really liked that chappie and I'm really looking forward to what's gonna happen next between the two of them.
    July 21st, 2011 at 01:43am
  • dreamerforever

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    That probably broke his heart a little. Oh Kris.
    July 16th, 2011 at 02:23am
  • dreamerforever

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    Oh, I really, really like this now. Stories with Kris are always my favorites.
    July 10th, 2011 at 06:37am
  • Moonlight123

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    I really like this story and can't wait to read the next chapter!
    July 10th, 2011 at 04:37am
  • hockeygirl3178

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    omg i'm completely hooked! update soon :D
    July 7th, 2011 at 08:09am
  • VioletSilk

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    IM LOVING IT.

    Your story that is. I think the best parts are her description of how cleaning and painting are alike & the microwave.
    Everything is just so good and the descriptions are so detailed and I just want you to post more!
    July 1st, 2011 at 07:26am
  • dreamerforever

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    I just loved that chappie! I was giggling like a schoolgirl the entire time.
    July 1st, 2011 at 05:45am
  • Fearless87

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    Yay! You guys are amazing <3
    July 1st, 2011 at 05:12am
  • dreamerforever

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    Ooh...I'm liking this! *subscribes*
    June 25th, 2011 at 05:23pm