So happy to find an update. I enjoyed it. It may not have had a lot of action, but it doesn't always need that. I have those chapters in all of my stories.
Lack of action can be good and is sometimes necessary. Stories are never as good when you don't know what's going on inside the minds of the characters. I really enjoyed this chapter. I love that she rides horses, it's unique and adds something different to the story. I liked the bit about her parents. And I know I didn't mention this before, but in a previous chapter you mentioned that random screams are commonplace in a college dorm. I loved that because, as someone that unfortunately is living in a college dorm, I know that to be so true! Moving on though, I wonder if she'll tell Kris about Max hurting her and if she does, how he'll react. And because of you bringing up the fact that Max picked up on her feelings for Tanger, I'm concerned about that now too! Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for more. :)
I don't ever disliked Max so much. What an asshole. I'm so glad this is fiction and not reality. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved that chapter! It was so raw and just perfectly amazing for what it had to convey. I really hope that Max won't get that far again though or release that video. Can't wait for the next one and keep up the fabulous work!!!
I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I love all the suspense now with Max and why Kris would do all of that for her even when Max found out it was Audrey who ruined his car. I can't wait for more and keep up the spectacular work!!!
Your story that is. I think the best parts are her description of how cleaning and painting are alike & the microwave. Everything is just so good and the descriptions are so detailed and I just want you to post more!