Acerbus - Comments

As a fantasy goes it's pretty awesome. I think a lot of people will appreciate how different it is from everything else on this site.

Just read Chapter 2. I love the story, and the descriptions of the main character's emotions are short but surprisingly effective. That's the kind of descriptions I like: short, sweet and to the point, and EFFECTIVE. You're really an awesome writer.

Awesome dude. Keep up the good work.

Tell me what you guys thin, I know the first chapter is rather ambiguous but things will become clear soon enough. :)