Dangerous Light - Comments

  • shadowxoxo

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    ;( grandma died;( i like it so far keep going:)
    October 16th, 2011 at 05:59am
  • bublbabie

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    loved this chapter and i did notice the change in layout. i had to reread the first chapter again because i didn;t recognize the background.sad about her grandmother though.
    September 30th, 2011 at 05:47pm
  • welcometotheshow

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    this is rly good... and I'm still trying to figure out what jordys deal is...
    September 30th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • just.breathe.

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    I fill so bad for her :( I can't wait to read more... I want to see what happens with her and Sidney!
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:52am
  • megpie12

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    Awe! That's so sad. Poor girl. On the bright side Jordan's there now. I just started to read this story so I didnt know the other layout. But it looks beautiful.
    September 30th, 2011 at 02:14am
  • just.breathe.

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    Oh no, i bet it's her poor grandma...:(........write more soon
    September 18th, 2011 at 07:21am
  • Jayla1231

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    Like it so far, like jordan being so possessive. cant wait for more
    July 6th, 2011 at 05:29am
  • forever sunshine

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    This is awesome so far.
    I want to see where this goes:)
    June 30th, 2011 at 04:30am
  • jenjenlove

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    I really like this. I love where it's going. Max kills me. And the romantic/sexual tension in the story is palpable. Keep it up! :D
    June 29th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • jenjenlove

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    I'm so excited for this! Looks like it's going to be good. Please update soon. :)
    June 24th, 2011 at 05:57pm