Hearts Burst Into Fire - Comments

  • Neche Narcissist

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    I love how well u capture my personality ;)... that 2 timing slut just wait until i get my hands on him imma twist him until his head pops off and i dont mean the head ur thinking ;P and he just left... jerk...
    October 10th, 2011 at 10:49am
  • ckvengenz6661

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    Omg! Yay But Nay At the Same Time...I Hope Cole Isn't To Hurt By What Zack Did.
    October 10th, 2011 at 08:15am
  • brittx7x

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    Okay I can see how he feels guilty and shit for sleeping with Cole with he's with somebody but... HE FUCKING LOVES COLE AND THEN HE JUST LEAVES HER? DAMN HE CAN'T DO ANYTHING RIGHT!

    Great update... but I still want to kill Zacky.
    I hope someone finds out and he gets his ass beat.
    October 10th, 2011 at 07:39am
  • babygurl94512

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    WTF!! Zacky is such an ass he did all that to get with Cole and then he just leaves her wow I just want to choke him!!!!!!
    Thanks for the update!
    October 10th, 2011 at 07:32am
  • SpencerG

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    Are you fucking shitting? *le straight face* Vengeance you're just gonna fuck the woman you love and just fucking leave? You have to be shitting me?!
    How the fuck did The Rev manage to steal my phone? *laughs* Damn! He's like a ninja or some shit!! Or I could've been too drunk to notice!! *giggles*
    I give The Rev the highest of fives for calling Vengeance a "bitch-ass punk"!!!! *giggles*
    But you know, I can't even be that mad at Vengeance. I mean he has done stupider shit. Like break-up with Cole because she is doing her job. *shrugs*
    Also I give the highest of fives to Neche!! Why doesn't Cole just understand that Zacky just found out he was preggo and wasn't making smart decisions when he broke up with her; now he is preggo for a very long time and his hormones are raging making him do more stupid shit? I mean when breaks it off with his girl and gets with the love of his life (Cole) he will have his baby (the relationship) and he will be fucking ecstatic!! *grins*

    Anywhoo!! This is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read your next update!! But make sure you get your work done!! I like actually like the song Super Bass and it definitely does fit. But until then... ^_^
    October 10th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • brianna7x

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    I wasn't expecting him to leave necessarily....although I WAS expecting him to screw up. Guess that just had to be how he did it x)

    I loved that chapter. You could definitely see how much they still love and need each other, even if they're both too stubborn to admit that. I have to wonder if the others are going to find out about it though and what their reaction would be if they knew he just left like that.
    October 10th, 2011 at 07:10am
  • alyv08

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    Great update. Why did Zacky have to remember? Oh well, it was a nice Zacky & Cole moment while it lasted. Can't wait for more :)
    October 10th, 2011 at 06:18am
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    what an ass..more please!(:
    October 10th, 2011 at 04:34am
  • Agent Baby

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    In my mind I was all aww how sweet.The Zacky had to go and leave.That was a good update update soon :{D
    October 10th, 2011 at 03:27am
  • carelesswhispers

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    That's horrible that he left!!!! I wasn't expecting that. I thought they would sleep together at some point, but I can't believe he would leave. It seems like he would cherish the moment. Anyway, I'm really glad you updated because NO ONE is updating. Thanks. :)
    October 10th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • avenging angel

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    What an ass!!!!! I kinda want to kill zack by this Point...Cole is just getting hurt more and more :/ great update!!!:)
    October 10th, 2011 at 02:41am
  • cattfeine

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    The guilt is what Zack deserves for doing that to Cole. xD Awesome update
    October 10th, 2011 at 01:52am
  • laceyvengeance

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    It was sweet of everyone to get Cole such awesome presents..and I feel like Zacky is trying to suck up to Cole..and it's slightly working...and I like how the guys tied up Zack..I laughed at that, because I feel like they would actually do that to either Zack or Johnny.. xD
    October 2nd, 2011 at 08:13pm
  • alyv08

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    Sorry for the lack of commenting lately. I caught up with all the new chapters today, and I love them all. Can't wait for Zack and Cole to be together again. Can't wait to read more :)
    October 2nd, 2011 at 06:56pm
  • DeOkIe

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    Loved it!
    October 1st, 2011 at 07:29am
  • AlVickyMim95

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    love it, hope they get back together soon :)
    September 30th, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • Neche Narcissist

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    Lmfao whoa! So happy u added our 3some convo in there... nice... Bris a good choice ;P... i so would give u makeup xD Dude Zee needs 2 calm his man tits... but... its kinda cute how jealous hes getting... hope dinner goes well & aww my boos right i do only want his dick.... well... ya xD
    September 30th, 2011 at 05:34am
  • cin

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    I bet the DVD is like the one she gave him a while back. Can't wait for more! :)
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • carelesswhispers

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    That was probably one of the best chapters yet! I really enjoyed it. I'm excited for the next. :)
    September 30th, 2011 at 01:40am
  • Rodeo Babe

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    I love it of so much! Update asap!
    L'amore di Anna
    September 30th, 2011 at 12:07am