Fix You - Comments

Love Love Love this so far. Can't wait for an update :]

The layout to this story is soooo adorable.
It made me smile.
And this story is incredible.
I was hooked from the first chapter.
The way you described everything...ahh, just amazing.
Please keep writing and updating!
:D

I’m not normally a fan of very bright layouts but it actually suits quite nicely and it just looks very heart-warming and I also like the fact that this is a sports fan-fiction. While I don’t follow hockey, I like the fact that is a sort of fan-fiction that shys away from the usual fandoms on Mibba and I like that and I also like that you’re writing about a real life couple rather than making a random girl up for Milan :3

I really liked the first paragraph of the summary, it was insightful and seemed all rather philosophical but it’s so true though and I’m sure many of us can relate to it. You start off the story with vivid description and you can just imagine the icy Canadian wind as he walks down the street and it’s painfully obvious from how he just randomly walks to Brittany’s door in the ice cold weather that he’s still in love with her and is heart-broken from being cheated on. D; My heart just broke for him, that’s got to hurt.

She stared at me, her honey-glazed eyes moist and red, and she hesitated before speaking, “I was afraid you'd leave me.” I really liked that line, it tells the reader that she’s either tired or has been crying without actually saying so which I like, because kudos for showing it rather than stating it :D

You have great potential and this will definitely appeal to ice-hockey fans. (: This was well written so far and I didn’t see any grammatical mistakes, keep up the good job!

that was sooo good!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Love it.

I hope you update this soon! I really like it.

I love it. cant wait for the next one :)

i really like this story so far cant wait for an update keep it up :]

loving this story so far...keep it up!

oh my gosh.... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really enjoy this story. I was subscribed and didn't even know it. Glad I was though. The memories are cute, but the heartbreak is heartbreaking lol. I feel terrible for him, and I hope it gets better!

Love this story.

"Get inside or I'm eating your pasta" o m g. i love this story :')

:] I love it so far;
I just know this is gonna be a good one :D
update soon!

That is sucha great beginning. I'm excited to see where this goes,

I am so excited for this (: great start!

That was great! I can't wait to see where you take it :)

I'm SO excited for this! So far it's amazinggggg. :)

wow, that was really deep and intense. Whenever I write something like this, I get a feeling of just relief and I feel all "who gives a damn?". It's a great start and want to see this go somewhere sometime.~Anya.

that was absolutely intense. i love it. you write really well. cant wait for the next!