Dream. - Comments

I liked this layout much better than the last. :) I’m not sure why. Maybe I’m just a fan of darker colors in general. xD Ahhhh, another bit of daydream material! I can honestly say I love your daydream material. This was so fabulously written, so beautifully descriptive…it reminded me of an actual dream I had once. The way you described it was very vivid, and pretty much exactly what happened in my dream. I’m not saying the dream was accurate or anything, but it just made everything feel more concrete with the way you wrote it out. I should stop blabbing. Again, your writing astounds me and I am going to go stalk some more~

<3 Haven

Definitely some screwed up things, but they definitely make interesting stories. :D Loved this one, too! :D

Can I just start off with saying that the way you use the english language in order to portray the mood, the environment is incredible. It's a fine piece of work. The use of metaphors adds to the feel of almost, well to me almost intense frustration. I love the way you use description, and dont try to cramp in to much. It was a great piece and I found no faults.

I really liked your layout, it's very nice and simple and all of the colours go together nicely (:

You make wonderful use of descriptive language and it's really easy for a reader to imagine the things you describe and I just adore your sophisticated vocabulary! You obviously know what the words mean, I hate it when people try to use complex words but put it in a totally wrong context ._.

I couldn't find any mistakes in your writing, well done <3

This was amazing. You used wonderful descriptions of things, I could imagine it all happening in my head. The story itself was great, and I couldn't find any errors in the writing.
I really liked the layout, it goes great with the whole theme of the story.