I just wanted to let you know that on the stories tab, like the one that as all the stories people have recently updated and posted, it says original fiction. Using famous people would be fan fiction. I am not trying to be mean I just wanted to let you know just in case if you didn't and meant to click fan fiction or if you put it that way. Last time I tried to be nice and help the person got pissed at me. So please don't take this the wrong way, just trying to help. (: And that to make it easy for the reader to space out your paragraphs. An example would be like create little sections and maybe just one section for the dialogue (an example: one section- "hey bob." second section- bob looks over, "oh hey" something like that). Good story so far (: