Exposures: Special Edition - Comments

THANK YOU! I LOVE YOU! OMG. I LOVE THIS. PLEASE DON'T GO AWAY FOR THAT LONG AGAIN. <3

I really love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter(:

I started reading this story a while ago but then I lost it for a while. D: Now I'm reading it again and I can honestly say that I really like. There aren't a lot of stories that I can read, just because of writing style preference, so I guess that's a compliment? Haha. Anyways, I see that it's ended but I'll keep reading it and hopefully I won't get all sad because of the ending. Great job on this story!

I LOVED THIS SHELBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the epilogue was great and i'm glad you added it!

Beautiful. <3 I'm so happy for them:) A perfect ending to a perfect story. A bit sad it's over though.

Okay. So i know you got my previous comment but Comment Swap says I didn't meet criteria. So, I enjoyed the story. I read a few more chapters of it and really like it. I love the story and the way it's set up. I can't wait to read more and if you decide to go with a sequel i will probably read that too. :) So I will keep reading this and hopefully catch up before your next update. :) HAha. Catch ya later.

Hello, I'm here from the comment swap as well. Your characterization is fantastic, but I have to agree with Vesper Lestrange some of the sentences are rather choppy and hard to follow. Some words such as "at" when you mean "as". going back to the choppy sentences bit, you do have a very nice flow despite them. Don't cut the choppy-ness altogether though because it creates a wonderful punctuation, such as the "three under his adam's apple. It is him." short, but powerful :)
as for Hollywood Undead, I have only listened to maybe 3 of their songs but I like how you show his character. Can't wait to read more! :)

The Comment swap sent me here. I read the first chapter of this story and I found that some of the paraghraphs were full of short choppy sentences. I would recommend you read your writing out loud, so you can see how it sounds in order to make it flow better. There were also a few wording mistakes, but other then that a job well done!

Got your story on Comment Swap! :) I like it. I'm not a big fan of Hollywood Undead but the story was nice. :) I'm only at Chapter 7 but i like it! Definitely going to keep reading. :)

Comment swap sent me here :D I really like the story, though I don't have a clue about the fandom. Your grammar and spelling are good, I didn't find any mistakes (doesn't have to mean there aren't any) and the layout is beatiful

damn that was kinky girl! i loved it!

So happy they're back together and everything is good with them.... This story is so emotional and beautiful<333 (not to mention sexy) -dances- Yay! Keep up the good work girly!

yey! you updated! i missed this story soooooooooooo much!

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck yeah bro! FINALLY! -does a little happy dance and gives you a plate of cookies-

they NEED to get back together! right now! please???????????????????

oh no! poor Georgie! and Shelby!

I want more.

Very good chapter

yey! you're back! i missed you!

This was a depressing way to end it! Oh well, at least there'll be a 6 month anniversary one! Can't wait to read any other stories you come up with!