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  • GreatNowImStuckToo

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    ^ Thank you C:
    October 8th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    And I've just noticed that your title's capitalised wrongly. It should be Would You Kill Me In My Sleep? Cute
    October 8th, 2011 at 05:04pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    * story.
    My bad. Facepalm
    October 8th, 2011 at 05:03pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    This is a cute story but you've stroy typed this wrong.
    It's not a original story - it's a fan fiction.
    October 8th, 2011 at 05:03pm
  • frerardlover1

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    this is good first chapter keep going
    June 29th, 2011 at 08:05pm
  • GreatNowImStuckToo

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    thank you , im still working on it but still thank you ;) R.I.P Ryan , you are and you'll always be loved <3
    June 23rd, 2011 at 09:16pm
  • JeremyTheThirteenth

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    Could use alot of commas, and capitalization, but it's good!
    June 23rd, 2011 at 12:19pm
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