The Things You Leave Behind - Comments

  • so unintelligent;

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    I feel like there's going to be revenge involved with this.
    But, I like it.
    July 6th, 2011 at 01:00am
  • searchingshells'

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    I've subscribed!
    LOVEEEED ITT :)
    July 5th, 2011 at 04:31pm
  • Wanderlust.

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    the synopsis is amazing & had me wishing there was more than one chapter & the first chapter left me wanting for more of everything: what happened with the sister? was she intoxicated? did anyone mysterious show up at her funeral? was there already a funeral? whats the protagonist like?
    hehe yeahhh
    July 4th, 2011 at 09:57am
  • Nanook

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    Hm... I like this. :) It sounds like you're going to have a great story here. :)
    Can't wait for more! :D
    Definitely... subscribed! :D
    June 30th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • jolie sophie

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    LOVE the introduction :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 07:27pm
  • morphine.

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    Thanks for letting me know that its out! I love the first chapter. Its not how I expected it to start which is good, I guess. I love it so far and I can't wait to see how it goes. I absolutely love the layout by the way. haha. I think I already said that in the previous comment I made. But anyway, keep up the good work :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 02:18pm
  • hannahbanana742

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    very interesting(:
    please keep writing!

    -hannah<3
    June 27th, 2011 at 07:02am
  • voidoids

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    YEAH? I'm the first one to comment on the actual chapter? YEAH!

    So I've decided that the size 299 might possibly be a bit too big for the comment ahead, so I've settled with 155.

    I do not think it's cliche at all. Your descriptions of crying and the invincible parents are really lovely, because I totally agree with the stone parents thing. But even our parents our human, so I guess they're not so strong after all. This killing your sister thing is so interesting. How did she kill her? HOW HOW. Answer with an update!
    June 27th, 2011 at 05:29am
  • Concord

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    That quote was awesome :) I loved it. I'm really curious to see whats going to happen and how Tate is going to play in the story<3

    Update Soon!
    June 27th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • morphine.

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    I love the summary. I know its not much. But that quote has always been one of my favourites. I love the layout by the way. Its absolutely beautiful. Let me know when you have a chapter up yeah? Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the first chapter :D
    June 26th, 2011 at 03:17am
  • nedfrid.

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    ARG. THIS ISNT WORKING. FML. Whatever. just click the link, bruh.
    June 25th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • nedfrid.

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    ^ wrong gif. HAH. Thats embarrassing.

    [IMG]http://i895.photobucket.com/albums/ac159/GIFsforhire/Dancing/charliebrownedance.gif [/IMG]
    June 25th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • nedfrid.

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    I DEMAND YOU TO WRITE THIS NOW.

    [url]http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww173/prestonjjrtr/Funny/1299621684jPuYmlT.gif[/ur]
    June 25th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • voidoids

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    OH YEEEEEEEEEAHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

    YEAAAAH

    YEAAAAH
    June 24th, 2011 at 12:09pm
  • jolie sophie

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    OMG I really want to read this. I love love love the summary :) I've heard it so many times and it makes me think every time!
    June 23rd, 2011 at 09:22pm
  • wild lavender;

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    I remeber reading that somewhere, the summary I mean. I love Greek Mythology and it's really cool how you put it in the story. :) Well, just as the summary.
    June 23rd, 2011 at 08:36pm
  • rains.in.spain

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    OMG THE SUMMARY IS EPIC! :D And it makes me feel better about being an antisocial loser :)
    June 23rd, 2011 at 05:24pm
  • paper flowers

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    OOH.
    June 23rd, 2011 at 03:02pm
  • xlaura17x

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    NOM!
    So yeah, Jordan up there's pretty much given me the ideas for what this story could be about because I'm not bright enough to work it out from your pretty summary. But I already love it, and am already subscribed ;] xox
    June 23rd, 2011 at 02:15pm
  • saeglopur

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    Okay, so just from the summary and characters, I'm kind of feeling like the sister is going to take the other sister's boyfriend. O.o But I don't know. Alls I know is that this shit right here? (I use the word shit in the best of terms not the worst) Yeah, it's gonna' be amazing. Seriously looking forward to it!<3
    June 23rd, 2011 at 06:33am