the synopsis is amazing & had me wishing there was more than one chapter & the first chapter left me wanting for more of everything: what happened with the sister? was she intoxicated? did anyone mysterious show up at her funeral? was there already a funeral? whats the protagonist like? hehe yeahhh
Thanks for letting me know that its out! I love the first chapter. Its not how I expected it to start which is good, I guess. I love it so far and I can't wait to see how it goes. I absolutely love the layout by the way. haha. I think I already said that in the previous comment I made. But anyway, keep up the good work :)
YEAH? I'm the first one to comment on the actual chapter? YEAH!
So I've decided that the size 299 might possibly be a bit too big for the comment ahead, so I've settled with 155.
I do not think it's cliche at all. Your descriptions of crying and the invincible parents are really lovely, because I totally agree with the stone parents thing. But even our parents our human, so I guess they're not so strong after all. This killing your sister thing is so interesting. How did she kill her? HOW HOW. Answer with an update!
I love the summary. I know its not much. But that quote has always been one of my favourites. I love the layout by the way. Its absolutely beautiful. Let me know when you have a chapter up yeah? Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the first chapter :D
I remeber reading that somewhere, the summary I mean. I love Greek Mythology and it's really cool how you put it in the story. :) Well, just as the summary.
NOM! So yeah, Jordan up there's pretty much given me the ideas for what this story could be about because I'm not bright enough to work it out from your pretty summary. But I already love it, and am already subscribed ;] xox
Okay, so just from the summary and characters, I'm kind of feeling like the sister is going to take the other sister's boyfriend. O.o But I don't know. Alls I know is that this shit right here? (I use the word shit in the best of terms not the worst) Yeah, it's gonna' be amazing. Seriously looking forward to it!<3
But, I like it.