You Suck At Love - Comments

Wittle PeePee.

I have a bad feeling about this? She's drunk off her balls and suddenly confessing to David and he's just crushing like a school girl and it doesn't seem like this is gonna end well the next morning or whenever you never decide it's gonna take place.

I love the nicknames for Pierre, they're too much. I love the vibe with all of the characters, the dialogue really flows nicely when you get that. There were two typos, I figured I'd mention them quickly (I'm not trying to be mean, I just thought you'd want to know).

“I jammed a tow when I tripped earlier. David caught me,” Genevieve explained, leaning into Pierre’s chest, eyes slipping shut." (I think you meant toe), and

“Holy shit, did you get mailed by a bear!?” she asked, and Jeff felt his face grow hot. (I believe you meant mauled).

Other than that, I loved the chapter update! It means drama, which naturally means I'm on board.

Okay, so I have this comments page open so that I can comment on some things as I read - just to amuse you.

Chapter 5: Chuck, leave David's ogling alone. But omg you have no idea how hard I am laughing right now. The moment it was known that Gen was in a bra, I instantly died for David. KNEW HE WAS GONNA GET A BONER HAHAH

Chapter 6: ohdeargod Pierre. That was sad.
AHAHAH OHGOD JEFF! That was perfect.
But akdjgha David. Gen. Gennn what are you doinggg. Is it bad that I think she already has a boyfriend? BUT NO, WAIT, I JUST GOT A NEW IDEA. uhm.. what if, she took on sexual favors? Like, one of those needed-money-so-provided-sexual-services moments in high school or early college or something... UPDATE.

I haven't read a Simple Plan story since their last album, this is pretty amazing. My favourite part so far? The line about Jeff's shiny bald head. So... more soon?

The part about Jeff's shiny bald head made me giggle. I wonder what is up there. I know he's gonna walk in on something involving Gen.

HA!! Poor little boy!! Tee hee. Bless him getting all excited!!
Loved it!! x

Dawwwhhh why is he so cute omg.
Shit, I forgot what I was gonna actually say.
Oh yeah. Holycrap he's young... can't wait to see how this turns out.

Soooo cuutee!

NO ONE CAN CONTROL THEMSELVES AROUND DAVID!! It's true =D Tee hee.

Loved it = ) x

Don't control yourself, Gen. DON'T DO IT!

Awww, she's starting to crush on David now!!!! How sweet!

This is super amazing!
I love it :D

I'm not gonna lie. I don't blame her for not being able to keep her mind of that adorable little man!! Tee hee.
Can't wait for more ducky!! x

Pierre is the cutest brother ever, I swear to God. And oooooh David, denying the crush on Genny. WHO'S THE GUY THAT CALLED!? Man. I can't wait til next week!

"Is he cute?" Am I gay?
Oh I cracked up at that.

Awhawh David and Pierre are so cute!

So good! =D I love the way your write =)

I love it so far, and what really has me interested is the title/summary, and wondering where it's gonna end up going.

Ooh my God, woman, I just died and went to Heaven. Another Simple Plan fan-fic coming from you? Yep, definitely in Heaven. INEEDMORE! This is gonna be good :P

I finally got to it. Haha. It's really good so far. Can't wait for more updates.

P.S. David really does have a cute nose. Haha.

OMG! I am SO GLAD you're doing another David story! (dont know if you remember me but im a fan from Quizilla that read the first david story! ughh i cant waiiittttt :D