Fuck Money - Comments

HOW ON EARTH IS THIS YOUR FIRST SMUT.
It's too good :D

I love this because you showed people can be in love without it being the perfect, fluffy relationship. I know I'm guilty of falling into cutesy stuff and making life easy for my boys (or girls) but you just blew my mind with how well you wrote their relationship. I'm really impressed.
I agree with everyone else, this cannot be your first smut. Seriously? No way. It's way too good, too detailed and authentic for it to be your first. But since you claim it is, I'm just going to go ahead and add you to my favourite authors list without checking your other stories first.
I'm going to read your other stuff, without a doubt, but I don't need reassurance you're a very talented author. One of the best I have ever read and I read a hell of a lot.

First off, the layout is really, really pretty. :D The colors match the banner, and it’s all gorgeous. Also, when I first read the title I thought it said Fuck Monkey, which prompted me to click on it. Sorry. Anyway! I’m not sure why, but I really liked how you started out with an onomatopoeia. And then you went into cuteness with Mike and Jonny. I also couldn’t help but think that maybe Jonny’s cheating on him, though. D: I’m glad to see he wasn’t. I did sort of get even more wary when one moved to the couch and the other to the bed, but I’m glad sex made up for everything. I really like how you portrayed their tough state with hardly any income, and the details that helped reinforce that – such as the threadbare mattress. Lovely job, I really enjoyed it. :)

<3 Haven

Right off the bat, I'll have to admit that I'm going to read this as an original because I'm not really sure who it is about from the picture alone. I suppose that is one suggestion I have to make; maybe include who it is in the summary. :) I loved the layout though; the colors went together really well and I liked the inclusion of lyrics. :)

I've read over the title of this a few times and I thought that it might be a song lyric or something, but I definitely love how it ties into the story itself. I think that it's really cute. :) I also really enjoyed how real their relationship seems; they might not seem like the perfect fit, but really, who is?

This was your first smut? Wow. You did a fantastic job on it; this was definitely more than smut though. You painted a picture of a very sweet, loving relationship that I think everyone of us wants at some point in our lives. Thank you very much for entering it in my contest, it was a pleasure to read.

... What the fuck.

Wait, were you serious when you said this was your first smut? Like, really, were you serious? Because fuck, that intense and wonderful and just amazing. I mean, were you serious when you said this was your first smut? Like, I can't get over that, this can't be your first. I've been writing smut for well over two years now, and God, I don't even know if I could write it that well. Like, I just can't believe that this was your first. Really, that just boggles my mind.

this

Oh damn. This was written so incredibly well. I loved this. I find it difficult to find well written smut (some are just terrible) but this was perfect. I loved the fact that you always referred to the other boy as 'his' boy. So adorable.

Absolutely fantastic. Thanks so much for gracing me with this lovely gift. <3

lol, cute :)

Hot damn.