Pull Me In - Comments

wow I liked this.

First off, I really like your layout; it’s very pretty. This was all so descriptive and I could really feel myself in this inner tube. I also quite liked the ending that has that bit of panic and mystery to it.

A really good drabble, no criticism! And good luck in the contest!

I love this. I once floated on an inner tube like that. I love how you described everything.
I also really like how at first it's so peaceful, and she feeling better with her thoughts going everywhere. And then, out of nowhere, it gets dark and kind of ends with a cliffhanger. I really didn't expect that. Very well done.

This was seriously beautiful. The way you can describe something simple as floating down a river on an inner tube blows me away! While I read, it was like I was that girl in the picture. That's an amazing thing to be able to do, write and make your reader project themselves into the story. Amazing, amazing, amazing and everything else you can think of. Fantastic.