Whatever Forever - Comments

is it just me or is that comment completely unintelligent fuck but i'm glad you continued writing this and i love you

i thought i commented on this already?? but i love this story and i wish it was my life because the image of an overgrown lawn and cherry trees is too much to not be a reality. also the ending "let's stay forever" is great and i love our friendship in this story the way it's portrayed

love this, i miss you. i'm taking this update as a good sign that shyne will be updated soon. "Only bad tequila," Kennedy said knowledgeably, taking it from her and uncapping it to taste. i like that, it's definitely something i'd say and just the tone that i'm imagining this being written with makes me smile. also, (from the description) i'm about to read walden by henry david thoreau. i can't fucking wait.

this is SO sweet

AND THE DESCRIPTION! "how are you?" "high. maybe gay. definitely unhappy." why is that so perfect, too.

i'm rereading this again so don't mind me. Lydia inched forwards, squeezing Kennedy's fingers reassuringly and after whispering that she loved him, pushed him into the water nearly fully clothed and she somersaulted in afterwards with a yelp as he spluttered and coughed in shock, Cole trying to unbuckle his belt underwater. the ending was definitely my favourite part (which sounds strange in a certain context making it sound like i couldn't wait for it to end but i wish it went on for ages and that this somehow became a proper story that never ended and slowly turned into a lovely reality) how he was unbuckling my belt and how you pushed me and etc etc. too great.

hannah i'm going to ramble ugh ugh i swear on cole mohr and my mom and on you that a smile genuinely never left my face the entire time i was reading this. it was so great! i agree, i loved the innocence while not being innocent at all and the humour and how it had this lovely summer feel that i crave all the time. my personality was so spot on jesus, how i was grinning and blushing and this mainly made me wish that all of this could somehow happen. and i loved how we were holding hands in it hehehe that was a nice touch and how you pushed me in and how suggestive they both were being, ahhh. wonderful djsukdj. thank you i love you c:

and thanks for the belated birthday! this was a great gift

okay, there is something wonderfully wistful about this and it makes me more in love will cole mohr and yuri pleskun.

like i can't explain it, it has an innocent and nostalgic tone to it and i absolutely adore it.

this is perfect already and you haven't even posted the actual story yet. stop being wonderful.