AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAD TO CATCH UP BUT O_______O GOIN TO READ FIRST CHAPPIE OF SEQUEL NAO O_O
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Awwww their wedding has finally come! The typical ay of Ronnie saying I Do! LOL So Max is the one that gave her away since she didn't want her so dead beat father? And another thing, Ronnie's mother didn't show so that was good!!!! It sad that story has come to an end buuuuut I am excited for the sequel! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awww!!! Theres nothin' like brotherly/sisterly/cousinly love...its cayute!!! And I loved when Scarlet acted like a kid and didn't want Ronnie to leave :3
And the carrying on the story instead of going through all that hard work is a good idea...in my opinion
THANK GOD I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE WHO NOTICED THAT MAX'S EYEBROWS ARE BACK! O_O I WAS SO HAPPY THAT I WAS SHITTING RAINBOWS AND UNICORNS. Don't judge me on that. >.> ANYWAY. This chapter was adorable. Yay for happy tiemz!!! 8D I can't wait for the weddiiinnnggg. And as for the sequel, you should man up and make a new story page, bitch! O_O Love you, honey <333
Soo excited for the wedding chapter!!!!! I want to know if some drama gonna break out or if it's going to be all lovey dovey and adorable. I can't wait to find out!!!!! Eek!!
I can't believe they are getting married !!! this is so exciting !! I apologize for not commenting sooner :( I never realized I missed so much ! I am SO excited for a sequel !!!! This is gonna be amazing ! I can't imagine not having a sequel to this story .
Dude I think it'd be fine if you started the sequel after the wedding. Just make it REALLYREALLY clear that your fast forward-ing because when writers don't make it absolutely clear that there was a time elapse its confusing as shit.
I think you should start with a new layout. And onto to this chapter review! Awww this chapter is cute, Max and Scar having a brother and sister moment. So before they both knew that they weren't blood related, Max had a crush on Scar when they were younger? man that would definitely scar Scar! LOL So Max is thinking of getting back together with that bitch????? I really think it's a bad idea because she can't seem to keep her legs close at all and she would definitely cheat on Max since she didn't get Ronnie! I cannot wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!