My Pathetic Romance - Comments

Holy shit, that made me cry. Not only because it was like my idols, but because of how you wrote it. I bawled at Frankie's, because it's the truth - it does get better.

That story made me cry. But it was beautifully written.

I think I need a hug

@ nirvana's massacre.

I'm sorry about your friend, she sounds like she was wonderful <3

THis is such a touching story, hun.
I used to struggle with suicidal thoughts, actions, ect. for YEARS, and was also a closeted bisexual. And that song, Make It Stop, makes me CRY every time I hear it. I mean... I just sob uncontrollably, because all of these kids died, for no reason other than other people treating them differently. Knowing I could have been one of those kids makes it even deeper for me. Great job on this story, and I hope that a lot of people have found comfort in this story... because I did

Oh God, the feels. This was very intense and just... I have no words. It's amazing.

There are times when I feel like this. My friend passed away from cancer and I just... people wonder why I keep a lot more to myself now. Why I give faint smiles. Why I laugh, and then revert into a daze. Why I toy with the orange ribbon I was handed at her funeral. I've contemplated suicide, but I know she wouldn't want that. I'm sure she'd say, "Dude, are you stupid? Go find some strippers, get laid, drink, and eat some fuckin' tamales!"

Memories leave you feeling empty. You hold onto them for dear life, and yet at the end of the day, you come to realize that they're not coming back. I clung to the hope that she'd get through it... but it was gone to waste.

Sometimes I feel like she's here with me. And then I cry because her giggles pass through my mind. Faint giggles, when I used to make her laugh about the most random, idiotic things.

She was one of my best friends. I regret the time I didn't spend with her - her last months. We were supposed to grow old together, marry our dream men (she was bisexual, but she had her eyes on her male neighbor) and become godmothers to each other's children. Life sucks majorly. She was only fif - fucking - teen.

Suicide isn't something to take lightly. We've just got to take tiny steps to rid of that mentality.

My chest constricts occasionally - at school, home, or when I'm out.

She went somewhere, but I'm not going to follow. Not yet. I have many years ahead of me, and I'm going to live through them in her honor.

I already read this so I'm just gonna say randomn things. LALALALALALALALAALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALALLA

So I found this on comment swap like i said but for some reason it said I have to read this again and post another comment. But anyway, like I said I really love this ad its extremely heart warming and beautiful and I usually don't enjoy slashes or fan fics. Anyway, love this ! bye :P

I found this through comment swap. I love this. It was so emotional and beautiful. I love the way you ended it too. You have alot of potential as a writer. It was deep and great!

Just randomly found the story and I read it all... That was the most beautiful story I have ever read in my entire life! I repeatedly listened to Make It Stop while reading this and it made me cry even harder than I already was. I absolutely hate homophobia!!! Loved this.
~Pansy

Aww, he didn't follow their footsteps.
This was amazing.

This was just perfect. I looooved he way you ended this. It has soooo much emotion and feeling to it.
I'm very happy that you put that message in this. It was greeeat.
Love ya
*hugs*

D: Poor Frankie. Just wow. Your story captures so much emotion. Just... Wow xD I don't think I'll forget this everr~

You're welcome love. This is very greeeat.
I must say that I loooved this one it was very interesting The way you put the insight of Mikeys life was very awesome. I looooved it.
Love ya and you're welcome again

Just want to let you know, you've made me cry whilst I read this.

I fuckin love this "story". It just greeeat and their deaths of love are just beautiful. I looove this.
Love ya

WoW. I loooooved it. It was very deep and greeeeat. Pleeeeeease continue it.
Love ya
Ps. I HEARBY DECLARE THE COMMENT VIRGINITY TAKEN BY MYSELF. ANGELY.