oh my gosh! this story is amazing! i seriously hope that john and shay get back together even tho john was being a jerk but still! ahhhh i just cant decide!
Heyy its me again! You deserve more comments!!!! Anyway, I like what you're doing with the story, I think its going to be interesting to see's Shays reaction, especially since they have kids. :) Keep updating! <3
I really like this story, but I feel like its becoming a little unrealistic. I'm not judging, because I could definitley not write with the voice and description that you do, but as a writer, I think there needs to be a little more unpredictability. John see's Annalise again, something like that? I'm not saying you need to come up with brand-new plot twists, i'm saying you could use some vague outlines and then fit the story to them. You know what I mean? :) Anyway, this story is amazing, keep updating! <3
i need the squeal please <3