Simple in the Moonlight - Comments

  • lovelyhope

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    This story was simply amazing (and now I realize mine pales in comparison lol). I am a sucker for "best friends that are in love but don't realize it until something big happens and then get together" stories. I would love for this to be an actual story. Maybe, Austin realizes that he actually wants Blake as more than a hook-up so he tries to win her back and she's caught in between Austin and Kennedy. That would be lovely. lol
    July 12th, 2011 at 10:23pm
  • la dispute.

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    I loved this, dude! For one, I love that Bright Eyes song and two, your writing is just always amazing, but I'm sure you know that! Lol. I loved the Cake Boss reference; such a great show! Hahaa. And of course, all of the idioms that you flawlessly included! I'd love it if you made this into an actual story! :)
    July 12th, 2011 at 04:15am
  • bottle bohemia

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    this was fantastic and so cute! i loved all of the idioms you used, too. this would definitely make a good story-story instead of just a one-shot
    July 11th, 2011 at 04:41am
  • disappearing act.

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    This was perfect! I looved all the idioms.. good idea lol. I love Austin & Kenny.. it's like you know me or something. On the reals though bro, loved it! <3
    July 10th, 2011 at 08:26am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    ALL THOSE IDIOMS!!! And you used both Austin and Kennedy?!?! It's like you are practically sucking dick on this one.... jesus, if I didn't love you... I'd hate you.
    July 9th, 2011 at 11:49am