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  • foREVerYours.

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    So, I usually don't get emotional when it comes to reading stories and stuff like that, but when I read this it really made me want to cry, it even made me tear up a bit. I really loved this story, keep it up(:
    August 10th, 2012 at 09:39am
  • cryptid mother.

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    It only posted the second half of my comment! >_< It was supposed to say,
    "This is my first comment swap, and I must say I enjoy this feature even more than I thought I would! I loved this story and your way of connecting to the characters! It made me smile and cry all in one! I would definitely read a FIR fanfic again just because of you and I'm not even a die-hard Falling in Reverse fan!! You're a fantastic writer! I'm so glad that I got to read this! :) Keep writing!
    June 12th, 2012 at 12:33am
  • cryptid mother.

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    I'm not even a die-hard Falling in Reverse fan and this brought tears to my eyes! You're a fantastic writer! I'm so glad that I got to read this! :) Mr. Green Keep writing! Smile
    June 12th, 2012 at 12:27am
  • MidgardMortal

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    I'm rather emotional after reading this. It's great, how much detail you put into this. Also, how you made the characters kind of your own was great. As soon as I saw the title I was like "YES. RONNIE FIC. FINALLY." XD After reading a number of sports fics that you don't understand, this is a nice change. ^w^
    June 11th, 2012 at 06:54pm
  • Car.Crash.Hearts

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    I loved it! I'll be honest, alot of stories on here is filled with cliches and this one isn't. I just wish the story was longer. It was beautifully, amazingly written. It was emotional, you felt bad for Ronnie and for Kate. You empathized with both of them. It's an amazing story. I just love it. <3
    June 10th, 2012 at 12:04pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    Loved it<3
    June 1st, 2012 at 06:32pm
  • EmptyInside

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    well.. i must say i didn't see the ending coming so soon. but over all it was ok.
    June 1st, 2012 at 10:51am
  • november_rain

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    that... that... holy hell.

    WHY AM I SO EMOTIONAL.

    you may be sitting right next to me, but i seriously feel like i was just called from florida and told all of this by le ladeh herself. like...for serious. 8'( i'm pouting at my computer screen... 8((( THIS IS/WAS AMAZING.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    beautifully, beautifully written, absolutely perfectly executed, all the ideas you told me were fluidly written out in a way that depicted it like a movie. it was amazing.

    i am so proud of you, dude. this was epic as HELL. not that hell is epic, but...

    i absolutely adored the portion in which ronnie put it all out on the table; where he was just like... i love you and i want you to come home. so frikin sweet 8') i seriously adore emma's character, she is such a sweetheart, and i'm so happy that rj can finally be back with his mommy. those eleven days must have just been... well, obviously, we know they were awful Dx but now, all is well, and i'm about ready to tear up. POUTING AT MY SCREEN AGAIN 8(((((((((

    perfect ending, i loved it, it was incredibly well written, and i am so proud of you. ima end this comment before i get any more emotional over this story, and dun PINCH/MAKE FUN OF/INTRODUCE ME TO YOUR HORSE NAMED CHARLIE for this comment 8( Dx -.-

    ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

    Molz
    June 1st, 2012 at 06:22am
  • carlaangel86

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    Aww I love it!! Yay they are back together!! I love happy endings!! <3
    June 1st, 2012 at 05:42am
  • I.Miss.You.Cupcake.

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    Loving this story so far
    Please update soon!!
    March 25th, 2012 at 09:44am
  • hachie

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    So with the help of Emma, Ronnie is going to see Kate again and try to bring her back home.
    I know Kate will be mad when she finds out that Emma gave away her hiding spot.
    I think Emma believes that Kate needs Ronnie and her son more than she thinks does.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 24th, 2012 at 04:15am
  • november_rain

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    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

    i legit giggled excitedly to myself at the end of this chapter. im really stoked that ronnie finally knows where she is and can go after her.. finally, he can go reconcile the wrongs and make it all okay. im honestly so stoked on that 8') i LOVE. the very end, what ronnie said to rj.. :'3 it just... it had me all.. just.. 8D and lasagna o_o lasagna is good. o_o im glad molly takes care of her brother. aaaaaaaaaaaaand RONNIE BETTER GET HIS BUM TO FRIKIN FLORIDA.

    just saying. UPDATE. CHILD. O_O

    ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

    Molz
    March 24th, 2012 at 03:20am
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    Oh wow. :)
    More soon!?
    March 24th, 2012 at 02:16am
  • CraigMabbitt

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    OHHHH MAIIIII FUUUUUCK
    WONNEH FOWND TAYTEH
    FANK CHU EMMAH!!
    ....like actress chick Emma stone? O_o
    BUT WONNEH AND AWE JAY AWE GONNA BWING HUW HOME
    I HOPE!!!
    March 23rd, 2012 at 10:54pm
  • hachie

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    Well at least Ronnie has a got little more hope than he had before when he read that she missed him too.
    Ronnie is really taking her absence really bad because he won't shower or eat much, he would only look out for his son who seems to his mother too.
    Now he knows that she is on Orlando.
    I wonder if he is going go see her or if give her more time.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 3rd, 2012 at 03:35pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    awe :(
    March 2nd, 2012 at 01:25am
  • CraigMabbitt

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    Holyyyyy hell. That was intense.
    Poor boy misses his girl 8(
    And awejay does tew. He knows something's wrong 8'(
    You gotta update soon bby.
    Miss Greatest Writer Ever
    <3
    March 2nd, 2012 at 12:18am
  • Through-the-Night

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    I'm so happy. I thought Katie wouldn't be in this anymore - which is weird because then the story probably wouldn't make sense. Anyways, it's nice to see her with Emma.
    February 12th, 2012 at 05:10pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    this story is fucking amazing! <3
    February 4th, 2012 at 04:05pm
  • hachie

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    So Emma knows about her past, the hardships that she went through when she was just a teen.
    She had a relationship with Craig after Ronnie went to prison but then the flame reignited when she went to see Ronnie in prison.
    She does need time to herself, she needs to find the girl that became so lost after everything went downhill between her and Ronnie.
    I mean she gave her life to help him stay clean and she just doesn't know who she is.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    February 4th, 2012 at 06:38am