Goodbye Graceful - Comments

Loved it!!! I like Emma so far... Sweet chick. Poor Katie :(. Her dating Craig once upon a time?! So didn't see that coming. Poor sweet back in the day Craig!! It was a good update, lots of info on exactly what happened to Katie. Good insight!

Can I just give Emma a hug?
Such a sweetheart.
Poorrr Katie though.
And Ronnie should get internet stalky and realize that her status said "updated near (city.. I forgot), Florida" :DD And come and be like I'M HERE. COME HOME.
Dx
So sadd.
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Gurrrrrrrlllll get some cyoott shoeezzz.:D
Update soon. <3

o______________________o jesus christ...

she's right; soap opera indeed. but hey, that's why she's in davenport and not vegas, right? <.< i love that emma is so sweet and comforting, with how badly she needs it. i feel awful for her... she really has been through hell. everything she's been through..it just..wow. all of the pain she's experienced. but you've gotta love ace, she's got so much personality :3 xD :3 i love that emma's so willing to listen; and that her ultimate solution was shoe shopping xD sometimes a day or two to forget is truly all you need. i'm just glad she's found someone to help her forget for a little while =\

i absolutely love this story, with all my heart. i canNOT wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. O_O_O_O SO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please?? 8(

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UPDATE! o_o

ily bestieFIRlifeeee <3333

Molz

Wow Emma hit the spot right on!
From what she saw in Katie, sh knows that Katie is running away from someone and that's why she ended up in Davenport.
Maybe Emma will be the person that could help her with her problems or give her some advice.
At least Ronnie and the others know that Katie is alright through her facebook.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well, hell.. That was an amazing chapter.

The first part, towered the end of which she rolled over and just cried her heart out, had me fighting that stinging sensation at the backs of my eyes. And that word; Anguish. I hadn't really thought much of it until I read it in this chapter and realized the weight behind the word. I love the way Emma was greeted in the morning, and how she was just all "well someones not a morning person" x'D loool I was waiting for someone to be murdered <.> I think emmas character is such an interesting addition to the story, I find her incredible straight forwardness shocking and amusing at the same time. That's quite a culture shock indeed o__o I think the way she just comes right out and mentions that she noticed the cuts and wants to delve into the very reaches of katehs love that ways interesting, too xD o___o o.O x_x the manager sounds like a nice guy; I'd love to find out what all Katie tells Emma as her back story.

WHICH TRANSLATES TO "UPDATE, PLEASEEEE"! o_o ......8'(((((( pweathe...?

*is prepared to beg and/or grovel*

Ily bestieFIRlifeeeee <333

Molz

Loved the update! I'm liking this new chick Emma... Hopefully she is what she seems... A nice chick and not a crazy bitch!! :)

Ohh jeeeez
That chick knoooows. She seems nice. Hopefully it'll get better quick
awesome update bby <3

Son of a BITCH, this is addictive. >.>
You have to keep going, ho.
Or I will find you. O.o

So now Ronnie knows why she left and he is determine to bring her back.
After watching the videos, his heart breaks to how distressful she looks in the videos.
Ronnie's sister is right, only he can be the one to bring her back, since she blames Ronnie for what has happened to her.
Right now she feels so lost, she doesn't know she is except that she is a mother to Ronnie's baby and his wife too.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gah! Poor Ronnie.
No. Poor whole family./:
I was expecting her father or Molly to blow up on him and he like.. Have and emotional breakdown if he hadn't had one yet...
I love how Bryan was like *shrug* at the beginning cause he knows o.o
I hope he finds her, even though she strictly said don't come looking for her. He is ready to go like RIGHTNAO without any idea. o.e
This is so sad.<3
Yet soooo good.
You're an amazing writer. No doubt.<3
Update soon.c:

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Those videos, wakin up to somethin like that brings back memories for me kinda.
Poor ronnie. Almost crying, here >.>
Hurry and post the rest, katald!
.....I feel like I'm scolding you by saying that xD
I love you and this story, bby, like always <3

This story is the fuckin shiz <33

...well, i would leave that like it is, but that wouldn't be very stimulating of a comment, now, would it?

so, im gonna go ahead and do my best to conjure up a sentence or two, here... but.. wow, kat... first of all, im not going to lie - it took me a minute or two to get down the difference between Monte and Bryan because i read it wrong the first time you said "Monte", so for the next couple paragraphs, i was utterly confused -_- lol, but eh, i figured it out <.< #fail. for ronnie to finally see just what he did to deserve this is..monumentally important to the whole thing, because really, if he didnt ever understand, he'd end up harboring anger that she doesn't deserve. he never should've let the past roll out the way it did, and this is what is happening as the result... im glad he can see that now. my heart broke at the portion in which ronnie spent all of that time freaking out because rj wouldn't take the bottle, yet it turned out to be so simple as forgetting to warm it up... that's when you know just how destroyed he is. but i'm so glad that that sit-down panned out the way that it did; he needed to have all of them there to hold him up while they saw the videos. and just, for the record here, it is honestly scary how well you know me. o___o hashtag just saying. o_o that applies to all parts of my dialogue in this. but then again, you know each and every one of your characters to a T, more than i think most people on here realize <.>

i absolute loved this chapter, it was incredibly well written, as always, and im just.. in dire need of the next chapter. O_O_O_O_O UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

Molz

there are no words...

This is fucking amazing.
Poor Ronnie, though.
No one deserves that.

thatd be so devastating to wake up to

So after all this time, Ronnie still can't remember what he did to her before he became sober.
Maybe watching the videos that she left behind will spark some memories to why she left.
Ronnie is really confused and he is about to break down.
I definitely can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This chapter... It's so sad...

I don't really even..this was just... Idek. I mean, just, the way he reacts is.. heartbreaking.. Because us readers know this isn't supposta happen for these two; it isn't as it's suppose to be. So it just..agh, god.. But, the beginning was sweet; I think the portion where Ronnie opens up the diaper was adorably cute xD babies will do that whole stinky poo thing :3 I found it really interesting that you had him call Mama first... I mean, the way that he seemed to have called for more than just checking that his girl was there, but for asking her what to do to get her back, and needed reassurance from her that his one true love wasn't just..gone. I loved that so much. I really, really hope this blows over like mama says it will.

I am just..absolutely dying for the next chapters. I NEED to read more.. PLEASE update...! Please..? 8( I will beg..

I liked this part;

“We’ll get this figured out, Ronnie,” Sandy states, her voice taking on a tone of authority that only Mama can have. “Don’t worry, she’ll come home. We love you.”

update..!

Ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

Molz

Aweee :/ Poor Ronnie and RJ :(

Poor RJ :(. I feel bad for Ronnie but at the same time oddly annoyed at Ronnie for his past sins. Still kinda shocked that she left her baby. Can't wait for the next update.