I love your banner. Its really cool. The layout is simple and nice. Title, eye catching. And for an Avenged Sevenfold fan like me, I fell it love with this right from the start. xD.
I loved how it goes straight into it. Especially the second paragraph drew me further in. I haven’t read a werewolf story in a while and this has my interests intrigued. I adore the relationship between the many character and Zacky. Poor Zack. :'(
The more characters that are placed in the story really makes the vibe grow. The action put into the story makes it more exciting. I love this story you have started. It has potential. Subscribing. :)