He's oddly charming, in a cocky sort of way, isn't he? I think the love was a bit rushed, but it's very cute, and the fact that Amber's an MRI technician instead of something normal. I think it would be easier to read if the font was a little bit bigger, other than that I can't see anything wrong with the style, story, or layout. Keep it up!
June 6th, 2012 at 01:28am