You're Perfect - Comments

Rose and Ten were seriously my OTP of all OTPs. I mean I like the idea behind this but I just didn't really feel anything. It was literally him sitting down, kissing her and then walking away. That's a nice image and it's sweet but I didn't really get anything out of it. The thing I got all 'awe' about was what he said to her but other than that I felt like if this was stretched out to even the five hundred word mark you could put so much more behind it. Otherwise it feels a bit too blunt. All I really see here is action and not emotion or description.

I don't really watch Doctor Who, but when I saw some of it I really liked Rose. She was really pretty and the person who played the Doc was cute as well.

I enjoyed reading this. I like reading and imagining them together and that much in-love. I cannot pick a sentence I liked more, because I liked the whole thing.

It was very cute and just kjfkdjfkdj. “You’re perfect, absolutely perfect, my Rose,” he said softly, pulling her into a gentle hug. He released her after a few moments then, kissing her again, this time on the lips, very gently, he stood up and walked out of the room. I enjoyed that very much. I liked when he said 'my rose'.

I'm sorry about having you drop out, but since I really felt bad I thought I'd comment anyway. :) <3

You are a great writer, Rachel. Don't forget it.

I've finally made it to your story. Happy Mibba Halloween! So I don't know much about Doctor Who just kind of bear with me okay? =)

Layout/Banner/Summary
I know the story is the most important part but the layouts and banner are apart of it. That makes them important as well. Maybe not as important but still important which is why I always comment on them. First of I really, really like the patter you chose for your back round image. Normally blue clashes too much with banners (or patterns if they're reversed) but you've managed to make them blend perfectly. It's the whole concept of hot and cold. Your banner is the story's warmth while the pattern is the coolness that makes the banner jump out at you. The summary is short, simple and to the point. It tells you everything and still makes you wonder whats inside. At least that's how it is for me anyway.

Chapter One
When I saw this was only one hundred and thirty four words I was worried I may not be able to do it justice with my comments. I've never commented on anything so small but I don't want to cheat you out of a comment. Now that I've read it I see there isn't much to say. I kind of feel bad about it because you've given me a great piece and yet I'm speechless. This was written beautifully and the detail makes it hard not to have a picture in your head. I'm honestly surprised at how much detail you were able to put into this tiny little story. It's just beautiful.

I don't know anything about Doctor Who, so I read it more as an original, but I really liked it. I thought you conveyed a sort of longing and sadness by the Doctor, because he wanted her but obviously couldn't have her. I always like your wording and the way you manage to make your stories flow, so there's just love there.

I think the layout suits very well, and it keeps with the simplicity of the drabble itself. It's short and simple, but it does bring up a lot of emotions without going overboard like some drabbles do (when there's basically just two paragraphs saying "I'm in love but can't have her" in so many complicated words that my brain gets all tired), so that I liked as well.

I sort of wished I had a bigger clue of Doctor Who, because I'm guessing I'd have liked it more then. But it was good! :D

I admit, I know little about Doctor Who, but this is so sweet! I like how you've made references to the universe so even non-fans can understand. This really captures the Doctor's feelings for Rose in such a small amount of words. I also want to add that the banner is wonderful.

Aw! It's so beautiful and so stirring! I absolutely love this drabble! It's my favorite of the three stories I have read! It just makes me feel so much love. And I want to hug the Doctor and tell him to take Rose away and love her and adore her forever!

This is short but says so much about their relationship and the Doctor's feelings for her. The doctor seems extremely sweet and caring as well as loving. I don't watch doctor who, but I loved this drabble anyway.

I love Doctor Who, I love this story as well. So cute, so sweet! Gah!

It was short but that added to the story, I love drabbles. This was lovely.

I've never seen Doctor Who, nor do I know what it's about, but I must say this was adorable! It's... sad, yet touching? Like, he obviously cares about her even though she just lost Mickey. I love your writing style too [:

Before I begin my actual comment, I just want to say that I adore your theme. (: I thought the layout was sweet; the background was quite cute. The story itself was cute but, like the other comments have said, it was definitely bittersweet. I must admit that I haven't seen the episode where Rose lost Mickey but I didn't feel like I had to of in order to understand this piece. I think that it was the perfect length and it conveyed so much emotion in only 130 words. Wonderful. (:

I was just browsing through the comments and realized this is a Doctor Who drabble. So I have no idea who that is but that's not the point. MOVING ON :D

Layout: I'm not too fond about the layout because I have sensitive eyes. I didn't really think the background matched the banner but that's just me.

Story: Would this be considered fluff? Or maybe a angst? :o Whatever, its bittersweet but I loved it. The way you conveyed emotions in such a little piece is lovely <3 Though all he did was step in the room, hug her, kiss her, etc. There's a whole other story laid behind(if that makes sense). I could definitely see this becoming a full blown story c:

It was very bittersweet. I love how you don't have to really know who they are to understand this.

I love the layout, its very clean and Doctor Who like. :D

I've never watched Doctor Who, but I actually have been meaning to watch it, and reading this reminded me that I was planning on watching it.

Anyway, this is such a sad and sweet drabble. I can just feel the Doctor's feelings of love and sympathy for Rose. This was so short, but packed with a lot of emotion. An excellent drabble!

I'm just going to say that I've never watched Doctor Who, (I know. I'm terrible. haha) and yet I was still able to feel a sense of tenderness in the relationship thanks to your wording of this practically perfect, (in every way,) drabble. Short, sweet, and to the point are what drabbles are all about and you nailed it. :)

That was a perfect little drabble! That's how I always imagined their relationship was off from what was shown. The Doctor loved Rose more than he showed her but they were just both so guarded. No relationship can ever compare to this one. It's just so epic that it defies both the universe and time!

Sorry for the double comment; did not mean to do that.

-Echo

I don't have much to say about this, seeing as it was only him walking in, sitting down, hugging her, talking to her, kissing her, then walking back out. Not that I'm saying that was tedious or boring or anything of the sort. I'm being honest when I say that I liked it. It was bittersweet, as stopwatch. put it, and I liked that simple kiss said a lot about the love he had for her, and that that kiss would still be there even when she woke up. Nice job. :)

I don't have much to say about this, seeing as it was only him walking in, sitting down, hugging her, talking to her, kissing her, then walking back out. Not that I'm saying that was tedious or boring or anything of the sort. I'm being honest when I say that I liked it. It was bittersweet, as stopwatch. put it, and I liked that simple kiss said a lot about the love he had for her, and that that kiss would still be there even when she woke up. Nice job. :)

That was short and bittersweet. I like how the mention of Rose just losing Mickey to the parallel world gives the reader a sort of time of line of where the story is set, even though that's not the point, but it still gives a feel to what is going on with Rose since she is asleep. I liked seeing The Doctor's soft side and the thoughts that he doesn't normally voice out loud about Rose. This was a very lovely and well done piece.