Ok well I liked it, the expressions and all those emotions were so vivid that even I felt it myself.... i loved the interaction cause it's like she's dead, but alive...doesn't makes sense I know, I'm curious to see who your person is...and the song title goes perfect.
I liked the interaction between Ryder and Noelle, and I think that you tied in the song well. The emotion was there, and it was solid writing with few mistakes. Great job. :)