The Lip Wars - Comments

  • Dejahvu

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    Pffft (I made Sam - who is the person who commented below me - read this, told her she'd love it)

    Truly I don't know what you mean by worst. It's really freaking cute if you ask me. I could see maybe "cliche" but meh. You did a fantastic job with writing, grammar, and description. I was giggling and all wanting to take a try at the kissing myself >.>
    July 4th, 2012 at 04:47am
  • fightingthewolf

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    This makes me want to try this....
    July 4th, 2012 at 04:27am
  • SweetSiDney1017

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    if that was the worst thing you ever written, holy fuck, where is your publisher? book stands here you come. i dont even like zack, but that was amazing. if that was the worst, what planet do you come from, cause that is out of this world!
    July 2nd, 2011 at 07:01am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    This was absolutely cute and adorable. I enjoyed it immensely and I didn't think it was a bad thing at all.
    June 27th, 2011 at 01:57am
  • cruciatus.

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    This is absolutely gorgeous, Ashleigh. I can't believe that you would write this for me. It was simply beautiful and amazing, and it made me feel much, much better. I loved it and I just...words can't say. I love it. Cry In Love
    June 26th, 2011 at 10:53pm