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  • Michael Westen

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    The way you write is very matter-of-fact, but at the same time you find a way to incorporate the emotions needed to sell it.

    "...I got an old man to that.” - Missing a word? :)

    Chapter 2 was good, drives me to keep reading that's for sure.
    September 26th, 2014 at 04:19am
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    So you've got my intrigued and I'm only on the first chapter. Just out of curiosity though, because the pictures are broken, what were they?

    Another thing to note, I've never been interested in reading a Sons fic before, because I never thought they could do the characters justice, but yours just might be that one.
    September 26th, 2014 at 04:03am
  • MANDYMURDERS

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    I found this story last night and I am beyond excited it has sense to it. I'm currently on chapter 15, but I had to comment now. This story is exceptional. You have the characters down pat and what gets me even more excited.....you pace it so well! :D

    And I adore Jenny. She's got that badass side, but you're not afraid to show a vulnerable side here and there. When I'm reading, I can honestly say I can hear the characters when they talk. Its basically like I'm watching the show. Oh, and I love that I try to keep guessing what's going to happen. This is absolutely amazing :)

    Very well done! You're an amazing writer. I can't wait to finish this and get to the sequal :)
    October 8th, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • femme fatale.

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    I love this so much. Your voice is exceptional and you capture all of the characters perfectly. I can hear them talking as I read, see all of their faces - this is fucking perfect.

    I love Jenny. She's so bad ass and such a Morrow, it's scary. I'm only on chapter fifteen, but I am in love. I already subscribed to the sequel
    August 28th, 2012 at 11:32pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I lovedit XD
    but Tara and jax's son's name is Thomas after his brother
    Update soon
    Can't wait for more
    August 11th, 2012 at 04:07am
  • bublbabie

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    great chapter but you posted it twice.
    August 10th, 2012 at 01:17am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I loved it XD
    Update soon XD
    August 10th, 2012 at 01:09am
  • bublbabie

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    short chapter but still loved it. I can't wait to see if they actually go to the courthouse or something to get married before the baby.
    August 9th, 2012 at 02:32pm
  • bublbabie

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    short chapter but still loved it. I can't wait to see if they actually go to the courthouse or something to get married before the baby.
    August 9th, 2012 at 02:32pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Loved it like always
    Update soon
    Are you going to kill him off like the show?
    Why was she sad when Tara said she couldn't wait to see your?
    August 9th, 2012 at 08:44am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    Can't wait for more chapters
    August 6th, 2012 at 02:51am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love it
    Update XD
    August 5th, 2012 at 01:31am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love it
    Update XD
    August 5th, 2012 at 01:31am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love it
    Update XD
    August 5th, 2012 at 01:31am
  • bublbabie

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    I povthat he is telling her to get out too seeing as he is going to try the same thing.
    August 4th, 2012 at 02:47pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Oh wow she pregnant?
    I love it XD
    August 2nd, 2012 at 07:51pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love it
    Upate soon
    Can't wait to find out what happens
    July 30th, 2012 at 12:10am
  • bublbabie

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    Is it bad that I'm kind of hoping you don't stick to the storyline in the show? You know.. the part where he dies.I can't wait to see where you end this one and begin the next.
    July 29th, 2012 at 09:31pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    loved it X^D
    Update soon
    I can't wait to find out what happens
    July 17th, 2012 at 11:45pm
  • somandysaid

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    Sequel!?!! :D EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE so stoked!
    July 3rd, 2012 at 03:06am