Falling Into Place - Comments

Sorry I didn't comment sooner. Poor Jack... He's such a strong character though. Hopefully Summer is safe from the bullets. I wonder what Jess is going to do...

Keep updating (:
I do enjoy the odd chapters a little more because they flow better and are better written. The even writeen chapters are still good, though, and I like the characters(:

I really this, as well.
I hope you'll continue to keep updating?

I LOVE THE UPDATE!<3

Update<3 :D

The story only gets better and better as time goes on. :)

i really dislike Derrick now! but i really love this story!

This story is amazing! Update soon.

The odd chapters are really well written, and it flows really well. The even chapters are a little bit choppy, need to be in paragrphs (!!!!!!), and need to be grammar checked before they're posted. It has great ideas woven in there but it just needs to open up. Maybe add a little more darkness to the other character? Both the odd and the evens flow really well together and I love how Summer is characterized. Just for that, I'm subscribing.
Odd - 4/5
Even - 3/5

i. freakin. love. this. story. seriously, im definitely subscribing! :)

thank you my friend actually started this book and she's writing in the point of view of summer(odd chapters) and i'm writing in Jessica's point of view(evens)

I like this. You can tell that Summer's a very solid character that you can imagine. It MAKES me feel bad for her.

I also love the idea of her being so associated with music. Because, in reality, a lot of us are. (:

It's good girly can i help?