Eighteen Years Waiting - Comments

  • GotNoodlesWithCheese

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    I love Tangled SO MUCH. I actually just wrote one-shot too.This is such a good story great job.
    March 9th, 2014 at 04:40pm
  • DarkestStorm

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    Oh gosh, I love Tangled. To like death, I've watched it probably 4 times a week since I got it two weeks ago. So good...

    Now onto your fanfic, I liked it a lot. I think you really got across the Queen's feelings well. This was well written. Good job.
    June 27th, 2011 at 10:40pm
  • psychotic secrets;

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    I can say I never read a fan-fiction for this movie, but that movie was awesome! The only thing I would change was in the begining, if you put the 18 years and a day into a list of months, I think it would add a cool effect. Other than that it was beautiful. Very well written again, I love the point of veiw too. Very daring, but it paid off. Good work again.
    June 27th, 2011 at 09:34pm
  • renai.

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    So...much...emotion. <3 Very well written. I love the repetition of some phrases, because it added to the feeling of the story. Wonderful job on description. And I, too, I love how it was in the queen's point of view.

    Please continue writing stories. ^^
    June 27th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • Beatlemaniac

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    :O *jaw drops*
    I LOVE YOU.
    Thank you for that. Seriously. Thank you so much. :'D
    *needs to learn how to make Mibba smilies again*
    June 27th, 2011 at 03:08am
  • aubs

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    Oh my goodness, a Tangled story! Anyway, I love how this story is told in the Queen's view. Her and the King were probably my favorite characters in the movie, I don't know why, but they were.

    This one-shot... It was just simply amazing. I began tearing up because it felt that what was written were the exact thoughts that were running through her mind in the movie. The emotion and the pain in this were amazing and just stuck to the movie. While I was reading, the movie was the only thing playing in my mind and I couldn't help but smile in the end. One thing I really liked was how they quickly accepted Flynn into their family even though he was a thief.

    Man, I really wish I had more to say. But really, this made me speechless. It was just so beautiful and wonderful and gah! I just loved it so much.
    June 27th, 2011 at 03:06am