Slap A Smile On And Call It Good - Comments

I'm confuddled. Is Andrew a good guy or bad guy? He seemed kind of mean at lunch and now he's her best friend. Okay I think I'm just confusing myself, never mind. I think I'll just go sit in a corner and listen to the voices in my head. Oh My Gosh that is an amazing idea for a story! I'm going to start one like that, okay I'll shut up now...

Hey Sarah, it's me Regan. This is really good and I'm glad you finally got it done because I've benn waiting for forever.

this was really good you should try and write faster...

Woop! Can't wait for this story! Good first chapter :)