The Doctor and the Cake - Comments

D'awww, I love this! (I know I'm forever and a day late on this, but you can go read my note on the contest wall for more clarification)
I could totally see all three of the characters talking and I heard their voices in my head, which is always a plus when reading a TV fanfiction.
You pinned their personalities fantastically. I can definitely see the Doctor acting that way after leaving Sarah Jane, so that made this all the better.
This is so fluffy it's almost funny, and that's awesome.
The cake fight itself was hilarious and I could see Rose and the Doctor doing something like that.
Overall, I really liked this a lot. It was very relatable to the show and flowed nicely.
Great job!

I have no idea what or who Doctor Who is but I'm assuming that it's a television show? Oh, well I'm not very hip, hah. It was so fluffy! I really liked the cake fight scene it was incredibly cute!

It's so much love! So much wonderful fluff! I absolutely love it! <3

It makes me so happy. Now I want to watch more Doctor Who! You just wrote this withs o much love. And the kiss and then the line and how it ended it's so cute! It makes me want more!

FLUFF! (Yay! I finally got around to reading it! Don't kill me since I'm slow!)

Usually I'm not a big fan of fluff, but this was so cute and it seemed like something that would happen in the show between the Doctor and Rose! And it wasn't overly fluffy, which I like.

I liked it's short-and-sweet-ness too. If you didn't know either of them well it may seem a bit... jfdlsakj, but it was a cute fluff and worked really well if you followed the show and especially their relationship.

Although I don't watch Doctor Who, this is a lovely story, with excellent structure and detail <3

OMG I LOVELOVELOVE THIS!!!! doctor who is like freaking crack for me <<<3333 this was awesome. Two things. One, the layout was a bit hard to read because dark on dark is a definite no-no. And two, things seemed a little rushed. Slow it down a bit next time and add more details. Other then that, IT WAS AWESOME

After reading the You're Perfect drabble, I saw the link for this in the Oneshot for Oneshot thread and had to read it as well. xD First off, I adored the background; it was definitely fluffy! I really enjoyed this piece; I thought that it was absolutely adorable without being sickeningly so, if that makes sense. It seemed very realistic as well; I could see Rose doing such a thing to cheer up the Doctor. You also represented the natural chemistry between them very well; I literally 'awwed!' at the ending. Great job, thank you for making me smile and good look with the contest. (:

I think that this is very cute, very cheery. I like that it's an upbeat story what with all the downtrodden stories you see around this site this is definitely a refreshing thing. I like the style of writing though it tends to be kind of repetitive at points. Like in the first paragraph, first you state that Rose is cheery, then you state that she is truly happy to be with her mom. I think that was kind of justified in that first sentence of her being cheery. I get that sometimes enunciating on certain emotions really pulls it across, but in this context it almost seemed unnecessary. Unfortunately, I have not yet seen Doctor Who so I don't relaly have any connection with these characters but from what I read it didn't seem very necessary to know who they were. So great job on making this a piece anyone can enjoy.