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  • beautifulrose

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    I liked the theme of the story but I got a little confused during the crash and chapter 2..
    but keep writing the story is pretty good :)
    September 17th, 2011 at 03:23pm
  • Raven Cross

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    ok really good but i got confused i thought Snows spine snapped. You know that would ether make you parlized or cause death.
    And im sorry to comment like this
    I love your ideas but some things just dont make sense thats all
    But your going in the right direction my friend! :)
    July 21st, 2011 at 02:54pm
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