No Where Left To Run - Comments

Wow, I look up "werewolf" and I get this amazing story! I'm so pleasantly surprised. I have to say though, I don't like Ashley Benson as Paige. Not at all. Jeremy isn't the type to have the flashy blonde (like Tyler and perhaps Damon is) more like like sexy brunette. One question- who's Sarah? It came out of nowhere, since Paige's grandma was called Emma, and then Sarah popped up...strange... One part I didn't like, several really, was wen you quoted the episode word-for-word. OH!! I know- it was the part with Mason; Paige had no individuality in the speech, which just made me visualize Bonnie saying the same thing on the show. (True, part of it is my fault for watching the episode so many times that I have it practically memorized >.>) Otherwise, I love how you incorporated your own style into the story without completely turning it upside-down. Again, it could have been changed more but it definitely had a different flavor. Could've used more time with the whole Damon/Everleigh part- they seemed to get together really fast. I'd definitely say that you jumped scenes between chapters a lot, so someone who didn't have a good background knowledge of the Vampire Diaries would have been VERY confused. Fortunately, I am not such a person :D. Love Elijah. He's so handsome...*swoon* anyway, uhh...Paige probably could have grieved harder over Emma and Jenna. AND I definitely would NOT go for a sequel, but I think it would be an AMAZING idea to write a spin-off of this story about Everleigh and Damon! Take shards of this story and make a mural, in a sense. Please consider it!

Please write a sequal! Awesome story!

Wow.. It's over? That's just.. And.. Oh well.. Thank you for the story! I guess that's all there's left to say about this..

I love this story, it's really awesome.

Awe it's over..I loved this story

I'm thinking of that line about; it's always calm before the storm, tight about now. Not too sure why. But I am. Things always seem peaceful with them and then "bam" new drama filled problem arrives. Good chapter.

And drama keeps on coming.. I wonder how they deal with it all. Can't think of a good comment - sorry. Good chapter.

That can't turn our well at all.. I think... It just doesn't seem like something where the sentence "piece of cake" could ever be used or even come near of the situation... Wow... I wonder how things will go and if Bonnie will in it as well.. Hmm.. Many wonders.

Even though I've watched every episode of TVD (and even read three of the books), I was very lost in this. I knew some of the characters obviously (Jeremy, Anna, Elena...) but your characters weren't explained very well.

You allude to one of them being a vampire, are they both vampires? And how do they already know Anna, Jeremy, and the others if they've just moved to Mystic falls? How long have they been in town? I would love it if you went into more depth on this.

And also, remember to always use punctuation with quotes! Periods, commas, what-have-you, they need to be there. This is a good guideline to use for quotes.

Keep up the writing, which other than the above is really quiet nice. :)

I pretty much have the same things to say about this story as I did the last story of yours that I commented on. There are quite a few grammatical errors, as well as run-ons, which makes the story seem to blend together. I've never watched The Vampire Diaries, so I also have no clue who all of these characters are, so that made it difficult for me to really comprehend what was going on. There are a lot of characters introduced in the short span of one chapter, and I must admit that it feels like a little too-much-too-soon.

I did think that the moment at the car wash was really cute, and I found the main character really relatable, although she's involved with the supernatural, because the point that she's at at the beginning of the story is something that most people have experienced.

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Plan after plan after plan. It's hard to keep up ^^

I loooovvvveeee this Story!!!!

[insert Wolf whistle]... Anyways, things seem to be going at a fast speed for everyone in this story... I wonder How things Will be when this is All over and the aftermath sets in... Hmm... Good chapter

This could turn Into trouble... Hmmm...

Love this story

its really good

besides maybe rewriting the ending.. she says she loves him too and then there's panic and she tells him.. it's kind of confusing.. other than that, it was a good chapter.. hmm... wasn't she in a fire at one point in the story?? I might just remember it wrong.. if that's the case then never mind...

more soon please ^.^

hmm.. Kathrine's back in town.. Damon is pretty much going to get his ass served to him.. I think.. and then I was like.. why didn't Leigh and Stefan notice his ring before now?? hmm... maybe Taylor's going to make some sort of come back.. erhmm... I think that was it for now, otherwise you'll hear from me again =)

good chapter and I hope for more soon ^.^

I had actually kind of forgotten that I was a subscriber to this.. so when the mail popped up and I saw the title all I coukd think was.. 'huh?' but then I saw the layout and was like 'oh..' anyways, good chapter. sucks about eher granmother, I'm wondering how she is going to handle it... more soon please =)