I'm Not the Man I Used To Be - Comments

This is quite amazing. I love me some good Rory/Eleven stories, especially those with different styles. :)

-kayt

So I've actually read this over three times but I'm just now getting around to commenting. I'd just like to say that whoever drew that picture is quite talented. As for the story itself, I thought that it was a really neat idea, writing without the use of quotation marks. When a story is all dialogue, I think that it looks better, stylistically, when it is void of quotes. I have to say that my favorite line was this: The man I used to be would never do something as rash as fall in love with you. My heart fluttered a bit when I read that line. The flow of the dialogue was very good, with the exception of Rory's major, long paragraph; that did feel a tad forced to me. Nonetheless, I really enjoyed reading this (again) and it definitely made me smile after a rough day. :)