Times New Roman - Comments

Seriously, cleverist title I've ever seen

But on to the actual content xD I'm loving how this sort of writing works with the Who universe - it fits really well. That aside, I can kind of get a feel for Rory's feelings through the writing, like it's a little smushed together and disjointed which is good for what's going on. I loved the bit about the TARDIS kind of knowing what's going on She totally would.

The only bit I'm not quite set on is this: "thinking of that man in a way that he honestly had never even thought of his beloved wife before," I dunno, I mean, it's not quite confusing, but I had to read it a few times to get the proper meaning. It just didn't sit quite well with me.

Aside from that, I really liked this!

First off, I'd like to say that I've loved the title of this since I first saw it. I think that it is absolutely clever. :) I loved your layout too; it was so cute in such a simple way. And, of course, that picture is absolutely wonderful.

I know what you get about feeling like you're rambling; it kind of does but it's good rambling. I did quite like this; Rory having the Doctor pushed up against the console? Nnpghm. And yes, that was a good noise. I did notice one small spelling mistake, where console was missing an e. The only part that I was slightly confused about was at the end, with the sentence ...and could possibly attribute to the fact that... I'm not sure what was being contributed to the fact, if that makes sense. Nonetheless, I completely and utterly enjoyed this and I really hope that you write more soon. Also, good luck in the contests! :D