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  • lovelyhope

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    I was not expecting that ending. Definitely shocked about what happened to Gracie. Hopefully Aryn and Garrett will be able to fix things after that yelling match. It probably got a lot of their anger out.
    August 28th, 2011 at 12:26am
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    Oh my god, that was an amazing chapter! I was so shocked I was no expecting that info on Gracie!
    August 27th, 2011 at 10:42pm
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    I just wish Garrett would stop being so rude to Aryn and get over the fact that she left. She tried to apologize. That's hilarious that Aryn didn't tell anybody that she was related to Pat. I can't really blame her though. Having people beg for tickets would be annoying.
    And thanks for the shout-out :)
    August 24th, 2011 at 07:27pm
  • roll_your_eyes_at_me

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    Aw I feel bad for Garrett in that chapter.

    lol Why don't you marry that Pat Kirch kid? haha That was funny.

    Updattteeee sooonnnnn...

    I hope the bracelet comes into play again sooN!
    August 24th, 2011 at 01:01am
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    ooooo! garrett walked out! ahhh! i cant wait for the next update it all just keeps getting better and better!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 11:21pm
  • lovelyhope

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    Aryn is doing so much for the Nickelsen's and Garrett is being such a butthead. Gosh. The part where she was watching the old home movie made me sad. I can't wait to find out what all went down in the past because right now I only have a vague idea.
    August 20th, 2011 at 01:28am
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    This was an amazing chapter!
    August 20th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • Arizona.Beauty.

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    Loved this chapter, love this story ! Update soon please?? (: <3
    August 19th, 2011 at 10:59pm
  • dreamingyouhere

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    So um, I love this story...

    So much I put it in my author note on the last chapter I posted for everyone to go read it. Hope that's ok. Haha.
    August 17th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • roll_your_eyes_at_me

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    Yay. I liked that chapter. lol Go Cass! Tell it to him straight.

    lol Update soon
    August 16th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • lovelyhope

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    Garrett seriously needs to grow up and get over his whole hating Aryn thing. At least her (ex)best friend stood up for her, well kind of.
    August 16th, 2011 at 03:18am
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    I liked this chapter, and I am so happy Kennedy didn't agree to have sex with her, that would have made everything a little bit more awkward
    August 16th, 2011 at 12:50am
  • roll_your_eyes_at_me

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    lol I liked that chapter. Probably my favorite. Why was Kennedy being a pervert though?
    August 15th, 2011 at 02:26am
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    Bahahahahaha I about died when I read the Spencer period part, that would prolly be the most embarrassing thing for a girl, but a really funny thing to watch the boys freak out. Also I'm glad that Garrett talked to aryn nicely for once. I can't wait to read more.
    August 14th, 2011 at 04:28am
  • lovelyhope

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    First of all, that little camper has to be the coolest 8 year old ever haha.
    The whole period part was funny but that would be so awkward and embarassing.
    I was really hoping Aryn and Garrett's talk at the end would make their relationship better but then Garrett had to be a jerk and say that it didn't change anything. He's really good at holding grudges.
    August 14th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • roll_your_eyes_at_me

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    I like your story so far.

    I'm assuming this Gracie girl died? From cancer? Just my guess.

    But also, I have a question: Who was she? Like to the guys and stuff?

    Alright thanks.
    August 14th, 2011 at 01:20am
  • State Of Grace

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    ok i love pat i cant wait to find out aryn's side of the story, also i loved this chapter and am completely bummed taht iv gotta wait a couple of weeks for an update but i hope you have fun at camp!
    July 28th, 2011 at 01:19am
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    I'm glad that Pat has decided to stop being rude and is being nice to Aryn again. Now Garrett just needs to do the same. The wreck she was in sounds intense. Garrett definitely should be nicer to her considering she almost died.
    July 27th, 2011 at 01:11am
  • ilovepatkirch

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    I love this storrryy <3
    July 22nd, 2011 at 06:33am
  • lovelyhope

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    I loved how they used to be "Garyn". That's cute lol. I'm guessing that Gracie was another Nickelsen and Aryn's best friend but died. Just my guess.
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:50am